Condemning the Heavens

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Tinalynge

Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. This novel, Condemning the Heavens, is my current main novel. It is my third cultivation novel and I have been writing it for over a year. It follows a guy who just wishes to be a hero, but reality is cruel and life goes against him time and time again. He is forced to flee for his life and he gathers friends and companions alongside his journey. The story is about how there is no good or evil in the world, that everything depends on the view of each individual, and that you have to fight for your own happiness. I have written quite a few novels. On this site I have Blue Phoenix and Overthrowing Fate which both are complete and cultivation novels. Apart from them, I also have a female cultivation novel called Forsaken Immortals, which happens to be a fantasy romance, and a few other modern romance novels. If you have nothing to read, please give these novels a try, I hope you will enjoy them!

LV 14

Aeternabilis

THERE ARE SOME SPOILERS. Nothing major just about how the mc acts and some reasons explaining the points of why I am wanting to drop. (Hopefully the author can clear some of it up?) The two major problems for me that stand out above everything else, that is making me want to drop are, When does he stop becoming a slave to his "uncle"? I just cbf to waste any more time on this if doesn't stop soon. I mean he should already have his doubts about him already. From all his supposed intelligence the mc was shown to have during the earlier chapters, it's baffling how he doesn't have some doubts. His town was supposedly killed by beasts but he is magically the only one still alive? He doesn't remember anything but when he does or tries to it is painful? He should have had his doubts in his "uncle" considering these facts but still believe in him considering all the time they spent together. However, it should have become frighteningly clear that something is wrong after speaking to Lan. Let's not forget what he called the uncle and even hinted at why. But the most important thing is he learnt about the soul/mental technique. He can make someone kill themselves, take their memories etc. This should have made it glaringly obvious and confirmed his doubts about something about his uncle is wrong. He should know that if he can do it, what is stopping an even stronger person doing it to him? Or is he so fcking arrogant to ignore this? He should have realised that his supposed memory loss is because of a soul/mental technique. Then adding on all the other clues he has been given then he should rly be starting to doubt his "uncle" and start realising some of the truth... However, it's like let's just ignore all that and keep the mc as a dog/slave/pet of the uncle. Make the mc seeth with rage everyone says something to discredit his master and be a good little pet and make him proud... I honestly can't stand it and rly want the author to just get on with it. The whole memory, adding on with all these clues should have acc lead to something. Another thing is the whole rage thing... I liked his other personality better. Where he didn't care about what others thought. Ignored them and only went after people who are directly after him. Now lately it's just been the mc acting like a fcking madman for no reason. I'm guessing it's because of the scripture or his special body that is giving him the rage. It was mentioned it was half the rage and the other half was him the calm side so maybe he has a beast side? However, how long does this last, when or does he reach a balance? I don't want to read about a psychopath madman that just wants to kill everything... compared to his first personality its a difference between night and day. I dunno just cbf to read about an mc losing control constantly going on a rampage every time he fights... plus it always starts or ends with the mc always smiling EVERY SINGLE TIME. Like we get it he is crazy. Do you have to mention the smile that everyone notices but him every time he fights or about to battle?? But yeah, prefer the mc having some intelligence like it was made out he had but in reality, he doesn't... Yeah, anyway gl to Author

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Samk

as im reading this book i want to just keep diving i could read it for days on end if i could and anytime i get passes to read more this is the first book i think about if you like an underdog that grows in strength but is still fair and not a snob i think you would like this book

Amo este libro, espero que el autor siga adelante. Felicidades jazz creado un mundo maravilloso. Amo a wei y a land [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Me emociona este libro, es sencillamente maravilloso. A medida que lo leo no puedo evitar preguntarme como es que yo no había escuchado de él antes. Maravilloso, sigue así

LV 14

Cvpro

Hi, have the following comments and hence dropping it as it is different than what I initially thought. 1. The MC is shown has smart and cautious character, but he is anything but that. In fact many times, he just acts like a madman and then tries to justify the action through some reasoning. Maybe the author intends it to be this way, but this is not my cup of tea. For instance, he goes way back to the capital to save his friend from people with too high cultivation, when he could have intercepted and saved him whilst he was escorted to the capital. And in the end, the friend dies. . 2. The MC is shown to be smart, learned and talented with amazing comprehension. But when he wants to unlock a storage ring which is usually through sense/qi/blood, he goes to a competitor and owes him a favour for telling him to use blood to open the ring. 3. The brotherhood of the MC and dog is very forced. Usually the development of such bond between the characters should be smooth and felt by the readers, but here the author just keeps on harping about friendship every other paragraph for many chapters to come.

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Cooper151285

Amazing story so far, I read blue phoenix aNd loved it, this story Is turning out to be a Great read. easy to read and follow , good characters and an immersive world. Well done

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StatikGamingYT

This book already seems good from the beginning. I like these kind of stories, I tend to read for 18 hours a day almost. So I intend to benge read.

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Astertian

I am really enjoying this reading. I like the special environment the author has created in this novel. It is really satisfing. I hope it will still entice my imagination. As for now, i really hope it gets more recognition. You earned it !

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Dark_Dragon_Stick8

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skyhigh30

well written book and could be improved in a few places but overall a great novel. ... .... ., .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. . . ... ....... .. ... . ... ..

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Anukam_Nyechukwu

Though it is not finished yet i find the story development to be in-depth, though xue Wei's talent for cultivation is absurd, and while he may be seen as uncaring he's actually very thoughtful of things but puts his and his friends needs first.

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DaoistJB007

Nice work, not good as Blue Phoenix though. But Condemning the Heavens has its own charm when reading further chapters. Still better than Overthrowing Fate.

I've started with Blue Phoenix and Overthrowing Fate, CtH at start doesn't seem to be gr8, but going fwd it is coming close to BP in terms of story and character development. The most I liked is the Hui Yue entry and connection to BP

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remy89

keep up the great work! [img=recommend] I love thus series and hope to read more soon. The story is great and progressively better the more you read.

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Mateus_Sergio_7758

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RallonWolfheart

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Skull_

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DaoistUnbespoken

brilliant, incredible, amazing, show stopping, spectacular, never the same, totally unique, completely not ever been done before, unafraid to reference or not reference