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Collin's Otherworld Adventure
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After dying in a store robbery, Reborn as Collin in a world of magic, and after being told that he has no real magic power to be a magic knight, he sets off on a world changing adventure to become stronger.
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So you killed his childhood friend and his first love... The development of this story is just unsatisfying... he reincarnated but don't get any kind of powerup and he doesn't use any kind of knowledge from his previous life to make a better foundation for himself... he travelled alone and almost died on his first day of adventure and barely make it safe with the help of werewolf and after some fighting here and fighting there with lizardmen and necromancer he decided to come back and put himself on the front line against a vampire lord and then he been framed by his kingdom as the killer of his childhood love and after that, he gets into the prison to discover the fact that he has a child with his elf friend.... and here I stopped reading because the development is far from acceptable its awful development...
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It has potential. I like the fast pace, although it might be good to experiment with the pacing so you get a variety throughout the story. I like that you don't get mobbed down with visual exposition but focus directly on the story. With a little refinement, this could be really good. I look forward to reading more.
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