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Code Geass: the immortal player
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This story will tell us about another reincarnator who reincarnated as Julius di Britannia with 5 wishes from God. Will he be able to stop Lelouch's vendetta or will he join it?Will Britain fall or only grow stronger under the attacks of enemies? Can the main character ascend to the throne or is he destined to fall?
Dear friends, this is my first fan fiction and I need your criticism and help, only with your criticism and help I can improve my writing and text. Also, English is not my native language, please point out the errors,I will try to fix them in the near future.
I don't own the Code Geass universe except MC
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Does the author still intend to continue writing?? The story is really good, I can't wait for the sequel. The only criticism I have is about the author of allying with leluch, it would be much nicer if they were rivals. And maybe you've weakened the emperor too much, julius will run out of good enemies.
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