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Another Naruto fanfic.
Guy dies goes to anime world and blah, blah, blah.
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Tulis ulasanDidn't really like the book. It was too chaotic. Unnecessary relationships. Broken plotline without any goal. Irritating. Even if the writing style was fine, plot was too forced. Tried reading it but got fed up after a few chapters. Still tried read further but had to drop. Sorry. Couldn't do it.
I thought this is going to be a light hearten story due to the picture. Guess I should have pay more attention to the title. .................................................................................................................................................
Seems like this story is going on HIATUS...quite a shame. It was fun while it lasted. GJ Author for improving my mood a bit by reading something interesting. FAN-FICs are simly the best.
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Membuka SPOILERIt was initially good at the beginning, later on it is broken as the title implies. Really disappointing. I hope author corrects his mistakes.
Its harem.....๐ค and the characters dont fit with their personalities in the original. Thats what ive observed from the first chapters. As most harems are trash i mean its realy disturbing and woild you share your man with someone else๐ (its my opinion)im gonna kick all the harem lovers out there mhuahahahaha๐
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I have loved the story so far, it has great character development and the author adds his own twist in order to make this fan fiction his own. The story is turning out to be amazing and I can only ask for more.
Good start, but bad decisions on the sage thing. I know u can do it better author ther first chapter were pretty good, please keep working in this fanfic
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Good novel, better than so e other Naruto fanfics I have read . More characters should make appearances and should branch outaide the konoha limits.
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Membuka SPOILERGreat novel it updates daily and get you want know what is going to happen next. It one of those novel that you eagerly wait for the next chapter to read and the author is nice enough to answer are question please if you want to read a interesting story this is for you.
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The MC is absolutely stupid, more than the original Naruto which is a feat on it's own, the rest of the story seems fine ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................