Bab 77: Author talks
Hi guys
This novel was actually my first ever writing experience. I started this years ago, at a time when I was not that good at writing. hence I made a ot of mistakes, exaggeration and over reliance on the system concept. To be honest that concept was a big hit in those times.
Anyway, in the reviews and comments I have been hearing a lot of negative feedback about the starting parts of the novel. That brings me to my question.
Should I remake the earlier few chapters and edit a few details in the story overall to make it more enjoyable and better to read ?
the changes would include :
1. a modification in the system concept - making it a sub part of the Sage wisdom eye and not have such heavy influence on Jun Kigen and his development
2. removal of a lot game elements such as quests, dungeons, levels and perks.
3. Jun will have the stats of the same nature as the latest system changes I have been using in this novel, the grading type stats divides into physical and spiritual ones, which also suits the chakra concept of Naruto world
4. changes to Sage Wisdom Eye (Seitengan) and it's function, I have already told about the remade sub function - the partial system elements. Along with that, the rune function of Sage Wisdom Eye will have slight changes too.
5. will also be correcting many of my previous plot mistakes based on my current writing style.
anyway, these are the changes I have thought of currently. Please comment in the next two days and let me know if I should go through with these changes.
By the way, these changes would also be correcting a lot of the age and timeline issue many readers have been having.
Any way, let me know 😊
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