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Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons
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This novel is currently on pause. It doesn't mean that is finished or that it will never see another chapter. Since it need a hard editing rework, I will now focus on my New Novel "My Demon Pet System", participating in WSA 2K21.
I sincerely hope you loyal readers will show your support by voting it and helping it climb the rankings.
I aspire to edit BoAP soon, letting you know more about Dag's adventures.
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Millions of years in the future, the Sun collapsed, and the existence of the human race on Earth was about to end.
Yet, the arrival of the Xis, an omnipotent alien race, saved the human from mass extinction and forced them to live under the surface of the airless, dying planet.
Their act wasn't selfless though. The Xis forced the human race to atone for their sins against the Earth by sending them on a journey to explore their ancient bloodlines.
They created an artificial solar system with a planet for each of the ancient pantheons, and divided the remains of the human race according to their ancestors.
Dag, an earthling kid, is about to undergo the test of his bloodline through an alien machine called "Temporum".
The Temporum would send him to the Viking planet, where he will discover an eerie connection with the ancient Gods and learn to wield part of their power.
However, he will soon find out that his bloodline hides far more than that...
6 pantheons
6 destination planets
A multitude of Gods and supernatural powers.
One destiny to fulfill.
P.S. This is my first novel. Comments and feedbacks are very welcome. I'm from Italy, so I'm constantly improving my writing skills.
Good reading!
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There goes our author worrying about his English skills, but truth to be told he's a bit better than normal native english speakers. Dag our little protagonist, hope he becomes that Viking op guy, and exploring other aspects. Story's good hope the author not quit the book half way hanging around. Make atleast 300 chapters for us, author kun. And thnx for chapters.
Well this novel is a hidden gem in this site It is highly under rated I highly recommend it I will add a more detailed review when i finish it It is really worth reading
Seriously disappointed tho. Ive read the reviews and really was expecting for less cliches and meaningful and better story making. The story started really good. Got me hyped. But theres not much characted development. In terms of attitude and personality, the Mc looks like someone who doesnt learn at all like still an 8 year old who doesnt think about their actions. I mean in the story he got 10 years of training and yet simple things like thinking whether it is safe to go out, or spouting secrets who shouldnt even be shared easily to others. I dont know i think he's just dumb or the author just wants to be direct which is i think is a major mistake, either he's lazy and forgetting how a logical mind of someone in danger thinks. Already having the ability of learning moves in a single day is like godlike and a plotarmor. Its just too overpowered. Hes getting stronger but dumber. Disappointed.
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The logic of this novel is a total mess! It says that the sun died because of the because of humans. But how could the humans living on 'earth' affect the sun in any way?? At most humans can cause the destruction of planet Earth but not the sun. There are 7 main stages in the life cycle of a star. The final stages consist of Red giant phase and supernova. At the red Giant phase the sun becomes 100 to 1000 times bigger than the original size. So tell me now, can the Earth possibly exist when the sun died? Not only that, the writing needs some improvement. The plot seems nice without all those plot holes.
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I think I gave the book a fair shot but it just does not suit my taste. The MC has no character development after leaving Earth, his values are weird af, he spent like 2 days in the Clan and the person that got him kicked later 'sacrificed' himself to save him and MC thought of him as a great friend? While his father of 10 years is never mentioned again XD? He idolized a dead person while he just gives no **** about a living one smh. MC seems too stupid for my taste like I don't mind a dense MC but one who has 2 brain cells is a no :D Kinda weird because when he came to this pantheon the instructor called him smart but somehow he became more of a caveman 'me smash' 'ooga booga' 'me kill' 'u ded' after the 10 year skip. You could say I should just read more because it gets better but is 86 chapters not enough?
The authors novel is not bad I just think he tried to introduce to many different elements in a single book, and the characters sense of logic is odd. I mean the Xis punish humans because humans action aprently messed with the universal balance. The planet was dying because the sun burnt out I mean humans arent responsible for that. Now don't get me wrong im not stopping anyone from reading this book just giving my review.
It's a hidden gem very much like it. Hope it gets many more chapters and the recognition it deserves. The myth content is very interesting.
This novel is underestimated! Great story development, writing quality and character design. World background amazing. The expressive capacity and imagination of the author are high. The story has a great potential and and I hope it has the right success, because it deserves it. I TOTALLY RECOMMEND IT, five full stars ๐ ๐๐๐๐
I like it. The plot can be well developed and there is a wide range for future development, as I can see dag becoming the Viking king and going on interstellar crusades or perhaps forming an alliance with his friend Hiro, who can also be a leader of his planet.
I love everything with the novel. Like the way new thing keep popping up, and the way we get to know Dag! I just love it!๐ I'm only on ch.103, but i really look forward to what is going to happen next!
I think this has some potential, but honestly, the grammar mistakes are a major turn off for me. I expect the occasional mistake and/or typo but so far there are too many syntax mistakes. I only read up to chapter 9 so far, will the grammar improve in later chapters? I didn't give a bad grade because I think the author crafted a very original and interesting world background and should he get someone to proof read and fix the mistakes in the early chapters I would truly enjoy this novel.
So far I have read a little more than 100 chapters and I cannot stop. The way the plot evolves with the characters is unique to the story. One of the best I have read
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๐ ๐๐๐๐ More stars please!! Dag's story is fascinating, the author is able to keep you on your toes, the story is fluid and meets all expectations. The language is perfect. Not all authors are capable of creating a certain suspense, a certain story like that. This book deserves to be successful and deserves to grow! 5 stars, absolutely ๐
Read it all in one day and i can just say wow. You can feel the character growth, the author has all well planned not like other novels the do things just because why not. I can't wait for more๐ (pardon my grammar my main language is spanish)
ok so this story is literally the only reason why I even signed in, I don't leave reviews at all, but this one, I just had to cuz it is fucking GOLD, Please please please do consider reviewing this novel, and do all that jazz so the author doesn't get discouraged and drops it. And for the author, if you do read this, I say BS to you saying that this is your first work cuz it's too good to be, thank you for this amazing work and keep it up mate.
A nordic sci-fi? Haha, well that's new. Anyways, the story and the plot is interesting and I can tell that this is quite a hidden gem among the novels here. Grammar-wise, mind the proper usage of capitals, that's the issue for me. Overall, it's great and I suggest readers out there to give it a try.
it seems interesting. though it seems confusing when I read first time with new words, once you used to I, it is a very good story, whether its story development or world design is nice and it's a kinda special and unique story...good story author-Kun
Sci-fi with fantasy/action contents, really suggested! The author knows how to create suspence and gives importance to secondary characters as well. The language is simple and fluent Want to read more! Can't wait! ๐ค
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