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Bleach Shippūden
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What happens when two popular anime worlds clash? Aizen and Madara had conjured a series of events that forces the Soul society and Shinboi world to clash with each other and creates a huge scale war between both worlds.
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This review is my initial impressions of the story. (I will update it later maybe...) The idea of the novel is very original, but it also suggests quite the challenge. The idea suggests that there is a huge amount of scheming and planning involved in the storyline, especially considering the personalities of Madara and Aizen. From what I have read, being a long first chapter. The chapter covers a wide range of characters from Bleach and probably just one from Naruto for now... The development is repeated across many teams, only to have minor advancements in the first chapter after reading like almost 10,000+ words. The writing is clean, with good grammar, though it does require an editor to correct a few typos here and there. The story requires you to have the knowledge of both worlds, which is mostly the case with fan fictions, with a rare amount of them reintroducing the world. So if you are going to read this ahead, It would be wise to brush up on the characters a bit, especially the first chapter requiring one to remember pretty much everyone from the soul society. I would also suggest watching the Bleach anime to get an initial overview of the bleach world design again since there is no original world design as of now as the author pretty much uses the same world. The choice of the character for infiltration surprised me, since it would usually not match with the personality of the character in the first place. The changes in the scenario, timing, and dates across every change in the scene make good pacing across the story, not leaving the readers to guess around. The story is in the beginning phase so I will not make any judgments as of now... As a fellow author of a fan-fiction, I know it takes huge amounts of time to try to maintain the initial personality of the character to the change in events... P.S Author-san, if you are busy in real life, please don't stress yourself to maintain a steady outflow of chapters, I would also suggest to shortening the chapter to 1,500+ words or so, to maintain a healthy pace and keeping the audience engaged. I salute you for your time in writing this very long prologue chapter. Also, I would like to encourage you to not drop this novel, if possible. Thanks for the chapter once again.
I hope you can do it this seems hard to write but epic if you can pull it off all I will ask is there going to be a harem And a non dence mc
La historia es bastante original y tiene mucho potencial, solo espero que no lo abandones ...........................................................................................