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Bleach: Innate Control
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A story about a guy trying to live through all the chaos in the world of Bleach.
MC's power is the control of reishi.
No Harem. The MC is pretty callous.
P.S. I will also be posting this on RoyalRoad and ScribbleHub, under the same name.
P.P.S. Webnovel is making uploading pictures for the spells more effort than it's worth. Please check the Bleach wiki for those.
P.P.P.S. I've got a Pat reon under the name Red Roman if you feel like supporting my work. I'll try to post a few chapters ahead on the page. I've also got a Pay pal, if you want to make a one-off donation.
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great story, and the pace of the story is just perfect, not too fast not too slow. but overall story building is amazing. [img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend]
The MC is just scum. ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........
So far i like the story a lot, at first I was skeptical because the MC seemed to be morally ambiguous for no reason, no build up to why he is why he is but that all changes when you see the consequences of doing what needs to be done to save himself and others. Now its plain to see there are no good guys and as long as he eventually stands alone against both soul reapers and Aizen in the end I think this story will be pretty awesome. using either side to get a head is obviously a smart move too. While I don't care if he he joins Ichigo and his crew or just uses them, I honestly rather not see them become fodder for him since they're literally the only people in the story who don't deserve to be punished in the end. excluding kisuke for multiple reasons and definitely Isshin, both can die for all I care. bad dad and terrible captain. just my opinion of course since the author seems to know what he's doing and ill most likely like the story no matter what at this point since I'm low key mad for him and how he's been treated already lol. grammar is great and the MC's powers seem awesome, and I already see good character growth. Keep up the good work. everyone should give this story a chance
Chapters 9-13 The Author clearly knows what he wants, but the steps to get to the point in the story he is imagining are just nonsensical to the point that even he can't explain what is going on.. The author apparently run out of ideas and is now resorting to the classic low IQ "I am a victim" narrative. Even Sasuke Uchiha is less of an edgelord and more reasonable and understandable than the MC of this story. Yes, Sasuke ramming his hand through Naruto's chest and Naruto never mentioning this or holding a grudge makes more sense than the thought process of the MC and those around him.
This is well worth a read just for me personally the author killed the fanfic with imprisoning the mc it killed all forward momentum and character development between him and gotei. I find it such a shame the fanfic is really good but for me its just dead. Writing quality is brillant. Mc is good liked the character. Give this a read its not to my taste and i kind hate it but you might like it.
Everything was going well, an interesting power with a fighting style that was rarely chosen among fics, but then everything lost its meaning, the plot was strongly forced, the Quincy style was never a problem, there are so many zampakuto with so many powers that it would never be a problem aesthetically It was "similar" to a Quincy, the problem was always the effect caused, the complete elimination, all this from jail and everything even more forced, I hope that if you write another book you find a way that is more rational and logical
An interesting bleach fanfic itโs a bit early to tell but Iโm gonna give it a 5 star review for now since itโs proven to be good so far any complaints I have are purely personal preferences such as the parts where is says โnarrator povโ and such or the Japanese names for the techniques or kido but again thatโs just personal preference just hope it doesnโt get dropped ๐ค
It's all good and all but sorry i dont think i will read it it uses to much Japanese words to explain and japanese isnt really my forte or anything and it hurts my brain all english fight and boom suddenly and japanese move he uses hoho then sakkatso (idk if they are names or smth or i made a mistake writing them) it gets confusing you should just stick to a language in my opinion other parts seem pretty good but this is a deal breaker when reading a novel for me
A great Bleach fanfiction!! I like it!!! ๐๐๐ It's my first time to read Bleach fanfic where MC reincarnate into shinigami but more stronger in Kido than Zangatsu or Hakuda (sorry if I say it wrong).. But that make this story so interesting.. Can't wait to see his/Riku bankai.. Keep up the good work author san ๐๐๐๐๐
Bleach.......๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
The story talks about the anime Bleach in the band Ichigo's father Ishin has an artificial intelligence ability or control in the Ritchie close to the Quincy the story is excellent, neither hasty nor slow
Good start, keep up the good work!!! I hope the author will not bring this story into a stupid harem, making it even more absurd than the primordial universe.
really good story good premise and very interesting some really good pacing to go along with it would recommend
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overall it's interesting but the update well is a bit short. but story so interesting waiting on his development
There are rarely any Bleach fanfics and even if there are, they are quite rushed. This one seems a bit slow placed, and I am thankful for that. Though it's just a few chapter, from what I have seen, the plot is good too with good power for mc. On top of that Author has a good grammar.