Bleach: Inconceivable Existence!

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mow

It's a decent read I won't say its extremely good or bad. It has a plot hole that I have pointed out twice to the author but he chose to ignore but It doesn't really affect the story as much but at the end of the day its still a plothole so it irks me somewhat. There isn't much to say regarding plot since it has been following the main story to an extent with no variations except for the MC giving Tatsuki or whatever her name is power and going to train with the Visored to me it just feels like the MC is just going along with the plot he hasn't stated any real goals so far as of chapter 21 and i find that lacking. Now onto the personal stuff (this didn't affect my review). The reason im dropping is because like i said the MC doesnt really have a goal and i really wanted to see something thats not just a guy going about to save Rukia and for whatever reason i dont know why he's doing it since he has never interacted with the other characters to the point where they'd call themselves friends its barely to the point where they're acquittances. Might be unreasonable but as soon as i knew he had Yhwach's ability to carve words into souls i expected a guy that become something akin to a Monarch he even has the power to raise the Shadow of things he kills but alas i guess it wasn't meant to be or I'm judging too early. Also slightly dislike how he granted Tatsuki powers but all she wants to do is punch him every chance she gets and he just allows her i guess, just feels eh.

LV 1

Osborn123

Reading this story is almost the same as reading the canon. The only difference is that here there is one extra character. Of course, this mc doesn't feel like changing canon at all, because what would he write then? And lastly there are a ton of changes in POV. This gets annoying really fast, as the only purpose they have is to express someone else's oppinion, but you don't need a change in POV for that.

LV 6

TFH

personally.... must wives are Yoruichi, Harribell, Soi Fon, Rangiku, Orihime, Unohana, Nelliel and Rukia(just to mess with her brother, worth it). any other girl is just a bonus.

LV 2

Sprewks

Very average story, not much variation from original story. Author is writing a typical wish fulfillment story, but the author needs a bit more writing experience. A couple of typos, missing words and grammar mistakes, and it's a bit too cringey for me to continue reading

LV 3

Infernowolf2213

I really like the story so far. I like the way the character was not made too OP, but op nun the less. I also really like that Toji was used as the looks because I don't see a lot of fanfics that have the OC or main character be/look like Toji. I like the way the characters interact so far. hope to see it continue and become great!

LV 6

iTride

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Capivara_Brasil

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Ibrahim_NiR

Hasta el momento es el segundo mejor fanfic de bleach qué he leído, el primer sobre shirou emiya convirtiéndose un hollow y creando el hueco mundo, pero este no se queda muy atrás sobre todo la forma en la que pasan los eventos pese a que son pocos capítulos y sé que se metieron varias cosillas es relajante y aumenta la expectativa me gusta

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WTV_IDC

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LV 4

DispiritedUser

Love the prospect, well written OC character and good writing. Hope it's not dropped, I personally enjoy it and you should read the first 3 chapters and see if you like it.

LV 3

Casual7

enjoying it so far, regret not waiting for a lot of chapters to stock up. hope the author doesn't drop and finishes this one, and that the harem is good

LV 1

Resident_5326

It's good but the updating stability ain't that good but it doesn't matter he backs up the updating stability with great chapters........................

LV 1

Carol_Santos_Souza

Simplesmente incrível, não há palavras para descrever tamanha obra prima, a personalidade do protagonista igual ao do próprio toji, isso muito divertido, nota 10 para tudo.🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰🥰❤

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Carol_Santos_Souza

Simplesmente incrível, achei a personalidade e ações idênticas ao próprio toji, o autor soube captar a essência do toji muito bem, fora a história que segue do ritmo muito satisfatório. A minha pergunta é, quando pretende lançar mais capítulos??

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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a quite good Bleach fanfiction!!! 👍👍👍 I like how MC (Cain) don't change the story much (so, he's still have his future knowledge), but a little change he made is obviously already make a butterfly effect.. I really want to see his power more, and Tatsuki power too.. Will he give power to another or it will be just Satsuki?? Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san... 😁😁👍👍👍

LV 4

RoughOnyon

The only way I can enjoy this thing is by not using my brain at all, it's okay, but I hope it'll improve I guess. Grammar is... meh, better than most story like this, I guess.

LV 11

Zwelton

Den er overordnet set anstændig, men forfatteren er en smule forblændet at dømme ud fra den måde hans mc reagerer på ........... .................

LV 4

LEONARD_CALUMPANG

Keep it up Author cause this fanfic of yours is truly interesting and I hope you can continue uploading chapters but don't worry I know how to wait.