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After dying at the hands of people he was supposed to be loved by our MC finds himself a chance to be reborn in the Demon Slayer world. Now he must try his best to enjoy his life, discover the secrets of the world, protect his friends and try his best to defeat the isekaid Miachel Jackson's army of demons.
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Tulis ulasanAs soon as you tell that your from another world it just ruins the story. Its a immediate turn off. It just ruins the story. Good start otherwise but im gonna stop here.
Hmm, Let's see. This is my first book and I wanna write it to the best of my ability. Whoever enjoys reading it I'm thankful to you for giving my book a try. Thanks to every reader for every comment, review or power stone. Hope everyone likes the book.
Well the main reason I dislike this is the mcโs an idiot. I like the author, I like everything besides the mc. Now allow me to explain why, Mc folds under โpressureโ Anything to do with his brother and he canโt keep his mouth shut, he was said to be someone who had to survive by himself but he canโt keep his mouth shut, his intellect is questionable, he has mood/personality swings from thinking he wonโt miss his parents to crying when she dies, he keeps 0 secrets from his brother who by all purposes should leave him, heโs the typical โacts cold towards his enemies and exceptionally nice to his friendsโ I know the typical excuse โonly theyโre gonna knowโ but thatโs a whole lot of plot armor, no amount of slip up can warrant him to not only tell heโs from a different world but also tell everything that happened including his death, the goddess, his reincarnation, Iโm assuming the system (of which he uses his inventory for everyone to see, literally in battle pulls glass shards out of his inventory, but magically only the demon saw it) tells him all of that which he could easily just answer the question with saying he has good memory :/ the story was ok except that heโs tryimg to follow the story, For a personโs first novel they should imo should make their own story. Story is pretty boring and monotonous, thereโs not much progress and the starting chapters amonth take a while for progress and also after a time skip add tons of things without an explaination. I donโt recommend reading this. Overall 3.2 โญ๏ธ
Demons evolved? Gods? Ultra powerful bloodlines but MC is weak as a chicken? Naruto series characters appearing randomly? Well, it was good while it lasted, the best thing about this fanfic was unfortunately the mountain arch, and the rest is bs the size of america. I do not like it. I don't like extreme changes in my favorite series for no reason, I would understand the changes if MC changed something relevant in the story and the changes would be inevitable, but here the author changes the structure of the world because he wants to and because he can, I'll wait for some future fanfic of this author where the plot holes are not the size of the bermuda triangle
The story has an interesting concept. However, personally, I have found it very hard to read. The chuuni references all the time make the story very out of place and not to mention the author constantly breaks the story flow by adding author notes between paragraphs. You may enjoy the story, it's just for me I couldn't immerse myself into the story because of these interruptions etc
Writing quality good. Updating good. Story development cookies. Character design Pizza. World back ground fanfic. Now I have to fill uh ๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅญ๐๐๐ ๐ฅ๐ฅฅ๐ฅ๐ฝ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅฌ๐๐ฅฆ๐ฐ๐ฅจ๐ฅ๐ฅฏ๐ฅ๐ฅฉ๐ง๐๐๐ง๐๐ฅ๐๐๐ญ๐ฅช๐ฎ๐ฏ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ณ๐ฅ๐ฒ๐ฅฃ๐ฅ๐ฟ๐ง๐ฅซ๐ฑ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ข๐ฃ๐ค๐ฅ๐ฅฎ๐ก๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ฅก๐ฆ๐ง๐จ๐ฉ๐ช๐๐ฐ๐ง๐ฅง๐ซ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ฏ๐ผ๐ฅโ๐ต๐ถ๐พ๐ท๐ธ๐น๐บ๐ป๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅค๐ฅข๐ฝ๐ด๐ฅ๐ช๐บ
to be honest, it is very chaotic writing. may have been better in third person. I can't pin down his personality. reading comfort is a bit low.
the power levels don't make sense he is just a bit stronger than tanjiro when he practices stronger breathing style and has 6 years of training more, and I don't like nerfs at all
just tell me who's the female lead and love intrest..... I want to see kanae with someone who deserves her not with a wannabe hero guy SO PLEASE TELL ME
I was really surprised how well it is written and how well the MC is developed. The story is also interesting. A big plus for me is how fabulously fits well.
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It's A Good Read... For Me At Least Anyway, Why Are You Still Reading This, Go And Read The Book!........................................................
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Is it dropped or something, I am starting to like this story. I hope the story will continue. ....... ........ .. ........... ...
Now this is a good fanfic, it stays true to the original work yet the author adds on and makes it good. Im not saying everything is great but I think its pretty worthwhile to read as you can see the author's passion and effort. Good job on the authors part! [img=recommend]
Could have been better Mc has a hero syndrome and has a boring personality. Decided to save everybody for his โplansโ yet people he saves are quite useless. And he tells his brother about him being from another world due to โguiltโ ๐ I donโt see how someone can be guilty like that but sure. Could have been better if there was a different mc. Pity dropped Everything other then mc is fine tho
I stopped reading this a while ago not because i dropped but because i didnt add it to my reading list imma try to read the rest tho i may not be commenting
i quiet liked this story and it also has a wolf ๐บ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐๐ถ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Protagonist has a wolf I don't need to talk anymore, it is already worth 5 stars and also has "KANAE-CHAN"๐๐โจโกโกโจ๐โกโจโก๐๐โจโก๐โจ๐โจ๐โจโกโจ๐๐โก๐๐โจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจ