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Bearer of the Red Lotus (First Draft)
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This is the first draft of the book I've been writing. If you want to read the second draft it's right here:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12515675406710405/Throne-of-the-Eternal
Thank you to those who helped me develop this novel!
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It's not a normal cultivation story, there's no boring tournaments or acting like a junior. The mc is shrouded in mystery, we never know what exactly he's planning or thinking. The writing is excellent and very descriptive, and a little bit flowery. Most important to the story would be the system, it's better to call it an exorcism + magic + cultivation story. The system is done beautifully, I would highly recommend it.
One of my favorite original authors, their works are great and consistent. He doesn't get nearly as much recognition as he deserves for some good work.
This is a book that will last no more than 110 chapters. This isn't about character development or a coming of age story. This is a man with a grudge wreaking mayhem and us slowly learning his motivations and outcomes. I know only part of the story because Ye Yuyan is creating himself through my words. This will be my opus magnum and will be complete with 3 months.