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Asoiaf :The Rising Son
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A secret hidden right under their noses
A young Jon Snow realises his worth in the world and vows to make something of himself.
People always did wonder what unknowns existed west of Westeros....
Author: DerkAndFullOfErrors AO3
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https://archiveofourown.org/works/15845781/chapters/36904053
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What is your goal here. Expand the original story or just transport it from ao3 to here ?
Great story, with nice long chapter ,the world building is amazing, I hope you continue this story.[img=update][img=recommend]
I have read the whole thing and I must say that there is very to like the whole thing. Like bruh....
I stopped at chapter 34, The story is good, it has an interesting development but throws everything into the air whenever Ned Stark is involved the author seems to be a fan of the Starks which ends up getting in the way and throwing all of Jon's development in the trash, there seems to be no consequences for Ned's actions on Jon's part and no resentment on his part, and being the father of the brothers/cousins โโhe can get away with it all, the only difference is that Jon curses Caitlin a little the path chosen by the author is not mine I like it but as I said it is not a bad story despite the ridiculous development in the last chapter by Ashara and her daughter, anyway if you like the Starks a lot I think you will have no problem reading this fanfic but if you are someone who likes something more balanced or if you are a targaryen fan I do not recommend reading.
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Well the one thing I am most bothered about is the world building aesthetics, it's like the characters are made to read out their dialogues in a white room. It bores me to bits, but I hope you can grow on that part so keep up the good work.
It been interesting all along,i don't have much to say,just a work well done KUDOS to the Author u're doing great so far.
are you continuing tthe story or are you just copy pasting? I've read the OG and the last update was in 2020
Loving this story!! Updating is frustrating but thatโs only because Iโm loving it and canโt wait for more keep it up!
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Story is great! The only thing I need is more chapters haha - It's that good๐ ________________________________________________________________
this could have turned out to be something good or fun but sadly i have to say this was the most boring thing i have ever read in my entire life, it's like reading the bible or a super thick history textbook that you don't read for fun but just because it has to, it never seems to get anywhere no matter how much you read.