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Ascension or journey from world to world
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The cover I used does not belong to me. I found it on the Internet, and it belongs to the corresponding person.
Also, all the works that I use in this fanfiction do not belong to me, and in no case do I pretend to be. This is just fan-made literature written for fun.
English is not my native language.
This story is about a young man and his travels to different worlds. Dying in his native world, a young man meets a god who fulfilled 5 of his wishes. What will be next? This we will find out later. I can say that I have plot ideas. Let us begin this journey.
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a jewel your story, is the second story of multiverses, with good arguments, I hope you finish it, if you read my comment, I wonder if it will also go to the worlds of: (nanatsu no Tazai) (Shinma Mao no testament), of course later of the worlds you plan to go.
this **** is boring, the MC just goes to every world and saves the characters, and he gives them his blood like nothing, in the future, he is probably going to give ability to every character in the world. **** this ****. feels like the MC is a servent going to every world to help each character and give them power. .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I figured it was rude not to review your novel after you reviewed mine. This is wonderful fic that feels like a breath of fresh air. The Mc is OP but not arrogant or attention seeking. He has a lot of woman but he treats them right. The journey through worlds is fun and i really enjoyed the way you handled each world. Your a great writer. Some of your ideas inspired me to write my own fanfic. Thank you for writing this story and i hope you have as much fun writing each chapter as you did when you wrote the first one.
There's no point reading this. The plot is freaking boring and author only knows how to save and let mc show off. There's nothing new at all
I'll be honest okay, the book is good it has a lot of good ideas and all. However, the writing quality is so bad that I can't continue. I take it that the author is translating this with Google or something, but holy **** is it bad, headmaster was turned into like ten different words like headman and Mr. Header, dafuq. Sorry about the rant about the quality. Onto the main character development, he was stated to be a super friendly guy who even saved a woman and a child before he died. Now he is a stone cold harem bastard, I don't think I can sigh harder, harem is fine but he has no personality, the romance is so forced I actually threw up (Then again I am sick) but the worst part is that the author doesn't seem to actually understand the lore of Harry Potter. I'll admit I haven't read the overlord parts or anything past it yet, but until the author uses something better than Google translate or gets a translator I will not continue reading. Now I'll repeat one thing, I love the way the book is going, it has potential. But I can hardly understand what's happening.
I was enjoying it finished harry potter arc and was excited for overlord arc but dropped it during overlord arc cause i realized MC was treating girls like pokemon and is trying to catch them all
Great novel please dont drop and keep going no matter what others say you doing a great jod here๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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I was quite enjoying it up until the end of the third chapter. Then it seemed that a completely new writer took over. The grammer quality dropped significantly, the complrtely wrong terms were being used such as faculty for house at hogwarts etc. Really ruined the enjoyment of the novel.
The Fuckin MC Has A **** ton load of harem He's like a fuckin prostitute a fuckin sperm donor. The story revolves in him getting all the girls in every world he comes what an unrealistic mc common the elves he save that just becomes his women because he saves them the story at is kinda nahhhh and then the story revolves around women its crap!!!!
One of the best multiverse story i have ever read. The Mc doesn't go abandoning his women in different worlds like most mc's do. That's a +1 point for this novel. The Mc isn't stupid and has clear thinking. As for what one of the comments say about the Mc being "gotta catch them all" there's a specific reason for that(Told in the early chapter). So all in all keep up the good work author. I would want this novel to continue with constant updates for long and get a high ranking. Good luck and read this.
It was really good at the start, I liked it a lot but then it went down faster than people falling off a cliff. At first author said he'll only got like 3 girls from each world he went to, then that plan got flush down the toilet. Most of those that gender are female is in the MC Harem........Even those that gender is male got genderbend in order to be add into the harem(Momonga from Overlord novel.........).There are some that name I don't even remember or probably didn't even got their name mention in the harem. In one author note he even said "Fanfiction about multiverse without a harem is like going to a restaurant after a hearty dinner" I don't even know what to made of that statement.... It's end up as he save a girl that girl end up in his harem, repeat a few time then go to another world, same thing repeat, no story whatsoever. There might be people that might like this story but it's probably not for me. Good luck.
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A few problems with vocabulary. The bad parts are the all knowing super capable sage IA, degrading the value of potions and potions ingredients, turning wizarding alchemy into xianxia alchemy.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ยฝ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ยฝ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Actually this ff is good, until before one piece arc. Just be honest I am fan of this ff until one piece arc And then become much downhill because ; Mc became women colector Mc more became sperm collector Mc became more and more like helping people too much. Recent arc, mc BEING BORN AGAIN in naruto world. What a blunder. and This ff doesnt have actual goal at all, just go to another world for sightseeing,a little fight, ansd for women. So, if youre move on from stereotype anime, antihero one and not hypocryte, this is not for ya.
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Good Strory overall....however there are few things that bother me... 1.MC turning into a "Gotta Catch 'Em All!" harem protagonist that only thinks with his "lower extremities" now that does not mean that type protagonist bothers me but this had lot more potential than that... 2.At the start where God tells him about some dragons having millions of wives just give birth to an heir..that will become more powerful than he is...that made it sound like the protagonist is nothing more than a glorified sperm donor waiting to sire the true Protagonist...after that idea got stuck in my head...my interest towards the MC kinda went away.... 3.MC is supposed to be op and all but why does it come across as if the wives are somehow stronger than he is? After all it is HIS blood that gave them power...so does everyone that receives that boost become as strong as he is? And since their dragons who by instinct measure things by power then how is he still the "leader"? Other than the 3 reason above...keep up the good work!