Another Life In Naruto

LV 5

Rak

man this story has potential, i like how it is going, the mc is too much hard working to reach his max strength because he knows the world and there is a system assigning him yearly quests to make sure he doesnt get stuck, but its too much AI written with low editing. so so many times same things are repeated again, whole chapters repeated with slight change, could be because of prompt changes. i believe with 1 level of editing (10 mins per chapter), this story can reach at least 80% of its potential, author has good ideas which he is able to put on paper with help of AI but AI has its limits. ill ask everyone to give it a try if only because of how much author is able to churn out in past week. in 1 week of writing, mc has reached age 8 almost chunin

LV 2

FadeKnight

An excellent story. The main character is interesting. The setting and time frame are interesting, but what really sets the story apart from others is the growth. The progression is perfect not once did I think it was going too fast or slow. If I had one problem with the story, it is that it’s missing an X factor. There’s no wrench in any plans, there’s no surprises. Just sustainable marginal growth. But that’s to be expected in a safe environment like kohana with no war. But I assume that will change in the upcoming chapters. Here is five stars to keep you going.

LV 3

Ryder_Black

great fanfiction, I really like it, I hope it continues and gets to the end.

LV 2

y07823890

Nice fanfic, However the ages of the characters are kinda hard to keep up with as they differ from the source material.

LV 13

HotWetDream

so far, the story is interesting, the only thing that ruins this is the writing style and how the plot and flow of the story is handled, it become too boring to read. Very poor character design, not much is explained, too plain, could do more work world background: gave 3stars cuz of Naruto background, otherwise I'll give 2stars, lack of description of place. ruins the whole mood of story

LV 3

DiperZ

Aburrido, regular, repetitivo, muchas descripciones innecesarias, todos los capitulos te describe lo que hace el mc y sinceramente muy expansivo para mí gusto, no estoy leyendo una historia sino un manual que no se disfruta

Please finish this work I really love it and I’m desperate to read more please.😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺. I love it so much you are so intriguing and new and so detailed. The characters have not seen before were made and Naruto was the best. The training regiment was so detailed mysterious and magnificent. I’m honestly blown away. I read works like this but you take the cupcake. Hahaha

LV 4

Jose_Joby

In my personal opinion this story is very well written far better than alot of other stories this managed to keep my adhd ahh to binge read it the system in the story barely plays a major role but it blends well in the background, i personally would recommend it

LV 4

Ansesh_Bundela

very good story with potential ,i hope author provides fast update

LV 4

Prince_Arsalan

i am writing this comment after reading 130 chapters . although writing quality is good but story progresses too slow, chapters are too much repeatetive , 2 or 3 chapters contains the gist that can be completed in one paragraph , like if you read 1 or 2 paragraph in the beginning of the chapter u most likely do not need to read rest of the chapter as they contain almost the same thing and because of this its not interesting anymore. its feels like the author is forced to write the story .

LV 4

grimxv32632423

Why is this author kept repeating ting stuff from the old chapters? It's really kill the flow of the book when something like this happen.

LV 4

Anotherhumanperson

Was good upto the early 300's. But after that it's not even worth reading. I recommend reading up to about chapter 300. You'll know when it goes to sh#t.

LV 3

greyrolph

An overall amusing novel with a good level of emotional development based on the characters and their feelings. 😋😋

LV 3

Faisal_Galvez

Tbh, I don't find anything lacking. It's a very good Naruto fic imho, kindly try.

LV 4

Humbuub

bad writing, overly redundant. I've read "this is just the beginning" at the end of so many chapters. XD

LV 3

grambit

I am in chapter ten already and i gotta say it's actually good. It is ok for me that the author uses AI as long as it's only used for assistance rather than using AI to generate stories. This is my first review so far so tune in for more reviews in the future

LV 1

LazyLazer_RSP

I had a whole short story's worth of a rant going and decided to just scrap it all since I realized I was putting much more effort than even the author into scrutinizing their work. MC's system eventually becomes the basic mission system you probably hate already(the ones with the 'do this or lose the system'), and it even gives bs op abilities that only vaguely relate to what he did to 'earn' it. The 'ai assisted' might as well be 'ai dictated' because it feels like the author never corrects it, even when it clearly breaks the story. My breaking point was when the reward was essentially a retroactive and permanently applied 3 tomoe sharingan. You know because studying so hard naturally deserves a reward of perfect memory and visual perception buffed to the extreme. All that and more is just base state brainpower so no chakra consumption like those pathetic uchiha and their parlor tricks. There was also some very obvious hinting that MC's going to develop medical ninjutsu in such a way as to make tsunade look stupid for being too "superficial" in her application of the technique she invented.

LV 12

Ashwin_John_5002

i just loved it. nothing more to be said. just loved it. read it pls also note this is a slice of life fan fic. so it might be slow to some

LV 4

Imain_69

A moment of silence for those who scroll over this masterpiece....(ITS DUCKIN AWESOME)

LV 2

DaoistUHlIU8

Why, why did you need to kill him, Sakumo didn't deserve that kakashi either, don't make a shadow of yourself out of the canon, make him much stronger, realize his full potential