Bab 13: I'm back...Kinda
Like the title said, I'm back...kinda.
Really sorry about the hiatus but I was going through a very rough time these past few months. Honestly, I still don't have the drive to write as much as I used to but I'm trying to move forward and writing is what I like sooo I thought I might give it a try again.
That said, tbh I've forgotten most of what I had planned for this story. oops?
I mean, I remember the gist of it but looking at what I've written so far...
...I gotta say I don't really like it very much. Seems kind of sloppy. Maybe that's the depression talking but I think it could be better in places. specifically, I don't like the system anymore. At least not the current version. I also don't really like how I overcomplicated her quirk, but that's just me. I can still work with it.
Now there are a few options available here. (not really. only two, but a few is more than one so...)
1. I can pick up from where I left off and try to salvage things.
2. I can rewrite the story and take out some of the unnecessary elements. Maybe she can't transform into monsters herself and only has her powers as android 21 and can turn others into monsters or summon them? System, no system? Maybe the old android 21 becomes the system and Mira is just her reincarnation? idk. I'd need to think about it more. Feel free to leave suggestions.
I'd like to hear you guys' feedback so say what you like and don't like about the story and I'll work from there.
As always, thanks for the support. Especially you guys that still came back to give stones every now and then. You guys are the reason I came back at all. Stay beautiful folks~
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