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Ancestor, Please Let Me Go

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Penulis: Aine_17

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Ji An Ling, often referred to as blue rose was given the job of assassinating the business legend Mu Zeyan.

She was notorious for her vixens like beauty, bitchy attitude, and her abilities.

He was well-known for his clean private life, money, and ruthlessness.

They were entangled with each other. One day he handed over a marriage certificate to her and arrogantly declared "You are mine"

"Mu Zeyan, One day, Maybe not today yet one day I will teach you a lesson of ethics" she warned him in anger and tore the marriage certificate apart.

"Don't worry, I still have the real one with me".

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Eam123

Love how you started the story - it's very interesting! Love the characters so far. There are a few mistakes here and there but they aren't too bad. Keep up the good work Author!

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FLORA_BARUA

Nice story. I really like the character ji an ling. she is strong and cute. The plot is also nice, but I mostly enjoy the romantic parts. They are overpowering. Love it. and keep it up.

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Undead_Tai

Have read the story until chapter 15. And I really enjoy it. although I like fantasy and Chinese novels more, but it wasn't bad reading something new for once.

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AliciaM99

I know you wanted me to edit this for you but I really don't see any need for it. The story is really interesting and I can't find many issues at all. Happy writing! ^-^

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Mineva
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These types of stories are among my guilty pleasures. I often enjoy reading these "husband and wife" stories even though they are often filled with cliches. This one though is good and unique in its own right and I can see a lot of effort went into the characters development. I look forward to more chapters!

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SnowPenguin

The story is well written, has an interesting plot and setting, and is generally much more than what the premise promises the reader. The pacing is good and it feels like something happens in every chapter.

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Shionokami

Alright, Author you got a really unique story! The charaters are funny and cool, specialy the two main leads (the other charecters are too, but these stand out the most!) there aren't many things negative to point out (that i noticed at least)

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Kookie_Gee

I love the way how the story started and started to develop into something more and I just love how you describe the story, the characters, all the surroundings! I really loved it! Keep writing author! my best wishes to you! ❤

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sucheta04

Loved it... It's a crazy story.. the characters are awesome. storyline is brilliant. Just absolutely loved it. keep it up author!! keep going.. my best wishes to you[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Jahrik

It's an interesting story in that you'll either love it or hate it within the first ten chapters. The characters have a sort of appeal you might not find elsewhere and the concept of contractual marriage is different than I'm used to seeing. I'm looking forward to the next one.

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Jhillen

This story is interesting but go easy on the storyline... I dunno how to explain it but don't rush it... Take your time... But keep up the good work

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MITCHIEWilliams

I like the plot it's unique. The characters are well developed and fun. The main character is a badass as is the male lead. I love the chemistry between the leads. There's still room for improvement.There are a few repetitions in discription but overall it's a really good book

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b3_rt
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well i read few first chapter and it's really-really amazing. It's definietly better than what i've wrote and the title is catchy too. good work

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marichat_nettenoir

There were some grammar mistakes, and the story felt kind of fast, but overall the story plot is quite good, and I hope we can see more chapters soon enough.

4yr
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shaznalye06

So I read your first few chapters! and I loved it was awesome I like the way you explained your characters and your story was very descriptive waiting for more! and Hats off to the author

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Glenstonx

(Ah i see, i only read the first chapter). You might've left unclarity at some point in a paragraph but everything is good. Their dialogue is accurate tho i think you should let the readers know what kind of voice they have so we can fully imagine it(just saying). Your first chapter has the ability to pull the readers into reading the next chapter since you left a cliffhanger and that's pretty great!

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LWnovels

This story is crazy! I love this novel. My mind get blown every single time I read the next sentence. The plot and characters are really interesting. I love the MC, I want her to be my bestie ♡♡♡. The author is overall a talented writer. The growth throughout the story is really thought out. Her grammer is mostlygood. I especially love the character designs. The way they are described is very vivid. Please give this novel a read! It's amazing!

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Kookie_Gee

First I love the character names! it's cho cute UwU. I love the writing style. The story line is amaze! it's got a unique vibe to it. At the beginning I struggled a bit to stick to the story but it's worth the time to read the whole thing! On the whole I just love it!

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Creative_Geek

A very exciting novel with good stability. It took time to read,but it was worth it. It was interesting and deep. Keep up the good work Author!

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ky_rine
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The novel has good writing quality. The scenes, characters and emotions were described well. The characters' interactions are very amusing esp. when they are outwitting each other. Keep up writing!

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