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Allure of a Country Maiden
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Shen Xiaoxiao had traveled through time, landing in an era of a place named Minze Country. Regretfully, she had transformed from a well-beloved, wealthy heiress to a disregarded money pit, unloved by her grandparents. However, the heavens had always been kind to her, offering her a portable space as compensation. Follow her journey as she rises to wealth in this primitive era, helps the populace lead happy and peaceful lives, and lets everyone in the Minze Dynasty know about their blessing of a Princess as beautiful as the country itself.
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Overall: It started out good, but with a severely unlikeable MC and a FL who, despite having all the tools she needs to be strong, continues to be a licensed, professional, bona fide, certified damsel in distress for no reason other than the fact that the author forgets things and has to highlight how incredibly awesome the ML is, it *severely* fell off for me. I regret ever spending a single coin on this novel. Detailed breakdown: Translation Quality: Poor. While the grammar isn't usually all that bad and it's mostly free from the MTL-level translation gaffes like misgendered characters, the names are *incredibly* inconsistent and weirdly formatted. Add to that the chapters, which skip around so you often have to wonder what exactly went wrong. For instance, it skipped from 791 to 992, then dropped back from 994 to 795, with chapters 792-794 completely missing. There are also chapters that look like the second half of a chapter got pasted into an entirely different chapter. Update Stability: Mediocre. See above about how the chapters get posted all willy nilly and shuffled around. Story Development: Mediocre and cliche. The author uses very repetitive plots on an extremely short cycle, all while managing to somehow feel like plots are artificially stretched out. It's also inconsistent. For example, the FMC has a space and sometimes the ML knows about it, while other times he doesn't know. The author even has the FMC bring the ML into it from time to time, even though she's constantly internally monologuing about how she can't let him know it exists. Character Design: Horrible. The ML is incredibly obsessed with the FMC to the point where she's not allowed to do anything at all for herself. At one point, he picks her up and carries her because she's not allowed to get blisters on her feet from walking, despite the FMC having grown up in a farming family. He's also obnoxiously jealous, to the point where he actively tries to prohibit her from spending time with her family and friends, but in an inconsistent manner. If the plot requires it, he's fine with it. Otherwise, he'll go so far as to physically restrain her from spending time even with her twin sister and parents. The FMC constantly throws herself into dangerous situations because she has a space, but then never uses the space at the critical moment, leading to a repeated kidnapping and hostage plot requiring the ML to swoop in and rescue her from her own stupidity. Yet at other times, she's incredibly intelligent, like when dealing with social situations and "inventing" technologies and policies to enrich the empire she transmigrated to. The FMC's father is *stupidly* filial, to the point where his parents and brothers/sisters-in-law have tried on numerous occasions to sell, murder, or burn his property and family to the ground, but he lets them off because "well we all survived, didn't we". Other than those three examples, the other characters are inconsistent in how they treat the FMC depending on whether the plot needs them to be friendly or hostile to her. And sometimes (okay, most times), the hostility is completely unreasonable and comes out of left field. World Background: Bog standard and cliche. If you've read one "modern woman transmigrates to distant past in a peasant farming family and becomes powerful" novel, you've read them all.
#transmigration #timetravel #farming #family. I enjoy reading this type of genre. The grammar is fairly good. However, I wonder why the chapters are very expensive, 14 or 15 coins per chapter. Although I haven’t counted how many words per chapter, I would say the length of each chapter are just comparable to other stories of the same genre.
A good story about time travel, golden finger and space. Modern lady doing wonders in ancient times.
loving the story wish I could keep reading it with out stopping but need likes or money to keep reading it 🤔 thank you author for your hard work
SPOILER: The story starts out good.Typical OP FL who is only 6-7 yrs old after transimmigration and apparenty she can make wine ,glass, paint,fishing genius makes furniture designs pottery ,toys,toilets pumps, farm tools, houses all being from a farmer joint family while being suppressed and almost starved by the other members. And of course there is a space with miracle spring etc. Nothing new or unusual lol. Now usually in these novels there is good revenge ,retribution theme and the parent finally waking up (which they should have a long ago in my opinion) What’s confusing here is that all while it seems like it’s going to go that way and the FL shows she is not happy and parents too however in next scene they are still dealing with them like close relatives. Few examples. The FL almost being sold in prostitution Being pushed by her cousin and killed(thats how she transimmigrated) Her cousin throwing boiling water on her Stealing their food Grandparents being biased again and again. Cutting of relations from the other side ‘and the cake for me was FLs twin sister was sold by the uncle and the grandparents and the other uncle knew about it.She almost died before picking her up and if the FL didn’t have space she would have. And no one was even repentant even after that the grandparents are invited to the feast in the new house the uncle who sold the girl also goes there so does his daughter‘ all of these are just used as small plots and her parent also get angry but it like they have schizophrenia or something and it’s all rinse and repeat Even the FL is offering soup and fruit from her space to the same family. Getting clothes and stuff from the money she is earning. This just got to my limit and I couldnt read on
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