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Adventuring Other-Worlds with the Adapting System
4.03 (21 peringkat)
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A young man awoke inside another's body. After fusing both their memories, he realises that he's in another world. He was about to begin his adventure when... [The Adapting system would like to bind to host, Accept?]
Please be nice, this is the first novel I've posted on here and while English might be my first language, I'm... not very good at it. Please leave a comment if something is wrong with my writing and I'll try and fix it.
Also, release isn't stable but please don't hate me for it. I'll try to release at least one or more chapters a week.
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I'm sorry but I'm a shameless author... Now I'm gonna take up alot of character space so I can post my review about. I really hope people read and like my work. I like to write because it makes me happy but I'm also really shy about posting my works. I have problems with grammar, past tense and present tense and points of view but I'll try really hard so I don't mess up. Please be gentle if I do mess up and help me out in the comments on how I should have done it. I'm not saying I'll use anyone's help but that I'll try and learn from it. In case no one understands, I have a quote that fits my situation. Give a man a fish, he eats for a day. Teach a man to fish, he eats for a lifetime.
All I can say is this is a damn good novel. The only reason why this isn't 5 stars is due to the update frequency but besides that, this is really well written and I cannot wait for more
This novel is at least really good at one thing, it somehow manages to have an amazing premise but completely waste it by having one of the worst MCs Iโve ever seen; dense, against killing, very stupid, simp, wants a harem, almost always useless, etc. Writing quality is ok though there is some grammatical mistakes, stability of updating is terrible, and I hate basically all the characters
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Bab 2 level 5 Bab 44 level 15 Wtf.. Noob mc.. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Ok why I don't give full star. It easy I just start the story yesterday. And I just finished her here. So I don't really know if it's stably updated or no. So when I can't saying if it's I can't really down grade than this the story for just not knowing ^^. But I think 4.8 out of 5 is a perfectly note for that story I could have make it 5 but when I don't want to lie for it, I still want to let everyone know : just fucking read it ! I mean it's good, you will like every character (well in fact for now there's a little teacher that will meet my fist if he can but well :wink:). The story go with a good rythme I think, most likely the majority of the choice the main char make are good choice. The girl in this story aren't just here to insult all the existing woman (I mean they are not damn brain dead girl just here to be f****ed) like every character of this series, they have have personality, history and make wise choice or at last understanding choice. The world of this story work with rule that work greatly. It's not like you will have a random broken character that will come help the hero just when he need, everything walk logically and greatly. I don't know if I have say it right but I just love this series. I'm not English native, but I understand everything. If you don't like isekai I don't know if you would hate this series cause it's not really intrusive in a bad way. And if isekai don't bother you, come try it I really think you will at least like it.
If you are wondering why it is 17+ you got to wait for chapter 16. It is a typical isekai story with a system, but stil a fun read. worth a place in my library
Writing Quality 3/5 Barely Readable. Stability of Updates 2/5 Author Only Occasionally Updates. Story Development 2/5 Laughable, the protagonist almost died 4 times within 9 chapters because of carelessness, and the "Accidentally Learning some family secret technique" plot armor, plus it lacks anything exciting or rather interesting. Character Design 1/5 Seriously the protagonist always over react at certain events that makes you wanna just drop the story. World Background 1/5 What background? there is NONE.
I am here to give a dashingly awesome review even though i haven't read it yet, because i feel bad about bashing an idiom the author used in his own review.
When this story was updating I remember it as the most thrilling story I've read at that time, really a shame they stopped updating.________
I love this novel, the character design, the world-building, even the plot is great, the only problem I have with it is that new chapters haven't been released for 2 years. I can't wait to read more, but don't wait to long please. ๐ ๐ข ๐
Is there any idea when the next chapter comes out? I really enjoyed this but I read books way to fast. I am currently in the middle of about 20 different book series waiting for the next releases, this one included.
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Stupid MC making stupid decisions acting like heโs in a stupid slice of life/purity comedy anime face faults and all making stupid decisions like he has a single IQ point just doing those same things over and over and over again something that even a child would see has an obvious solution but as an ***** put into the body of a child you should obviously see what the solution is but he just keeps going on with it with the author making the main character and make obvious mistakes to try to keep the plot going when itโs not Necessary๏ฟผ๏ฟผ๏ฟผ
I like everything about this book, the only thing I could criticize is the stability and length between updates, other than that, read it, NOW!!
This story is very nice and somewhat thought out. The problem with it is that the character depends WAY to much on the system. Half the book is focused on the interactions between the system and the protagonist.
I can confidentely say that this should be a lot more popular than it is because its overall one of the best stories i've ever read p.s this has many sexual refrences
I've read many novels with sub-par story development and terrible grammar but this... this is a hidden gem. Only thing to nit-pick is update frequency.
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WHAT?!?! FINALLY A WRITER WHO DOESN'T USE THE "ENGLISH ISN'T MY FIRST LANGUAGE" CARD AS AN EXCUSE FOR THEM NOT BEING ABLE TO USE CORRECT GRAMMAR?!? I RESPECT THIS WRITER!!