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Adventuring in Pokémon
Penulis: JakeWJElliott
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Ringkasan
A youth named Ace was playing Pokémon until his DS died causing the screen to go black just after he had became Champion. Enraged he throws the DS across the room until a white light envelops him and he disappears leaving his messy room unaccompanied.
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- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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I love the story so far and I hope you continue as I think it can serve to be a amazing novel and has potential to get high in the ranking. ..................
this is the worst story ever, I mean, at this rate you might as well give Ace a poke ball that can hold a unlimited amount of pokemon or while your at it just give him a mew two with a infinity gauntlet or give him a Lv. 100 Arces that can destroy a mountain with a sneeze