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Shusui a 24 year old man is walking outside his house for the first time after 4 years, suddenly a brown clay pot fell out of nowhere directly on his head which instanly killed him
After that he met a man who introduced himself as the one who created all things and also the one responsible for that clay pot that killed him
"This is all an accident" The man sighed heavily while massaging his temples
"I'll just grant you 5 wishes, and I'll send you to any world you like, I know this might sound like the ones in the novels, but this is the first time I will do something like this, you see I recently read something like this, and this happens, this is ridiculous" The man said to Shusui
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Tulis ulasanThe story is great keep it up, honestly i want to know what wish did the mc make but hopefully you make it clear. Waiting for the next update.
Its not bad overall a good read for fun grammer is weird as in bad grammer lol story background it’s One Piece lol updates preety good other than we ain’t get chapter in 2 days character design not bad also the guy who talking bout instant mastery you can’ instantly master a cultivation technique unless its like the sword one the problem is he has to suck energy of some kind to cultivate you cant instant suck lol that sound sus but anyways character design aight not the best but for this website ok preety funny how the Goresei are scared of mc 1.he’s immortal 2. He could destroy the multiverse++ lol story development looks like your heading down a Sensei route where mc has a bunch of students and sends them to venture worlds and cause Chaos and madness it’a ok but we barely see mc get into an actual fights would love to see that…….well someone close to his level lol………you thought it was me no it was:
I'll be honest here this has a lot of potential and superb writing. But the Mc here is trash, a bloody waste who would share OP cheats with any random dog, I mean he would right obviously he didn't work for those powers so he wouldn't care. If you like a beta kind power of friendship Mc this is for you. Good luck author with this. I don't understand why you would give the grandmist technique and a small part of the system to the kid. The Mc could train him normally but why giving him those cheats, author you're main mistake is giving the Mc free items in the shop. This way the Mc doesn't have to work for anything and the trash gets everything for free. Imagine you put the price of senzu beans very expensive the idiot Mc wouldn't even spend it on himself nevertheless a random kid
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The MC has instant mastery at forgetting he has instant mastery 💀 Btw, the MC has a party function 💀... Every story messes up with that function, and this will most definitely mess up due to the Author's lack of remembrance as to what he wrote.
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