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abyss system
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Zenith, an average office worker, finds himself trapped in a relentless cycle of bullying and exploitation from his colleagues, pushing him to the brink of despair. Contemplating an end to his life, he reaches his darkest moment. However, in this bleakness, a mysterious figure materializes, presenting him with an alternative: a chance to embark on a new existence in another world. Fueled by a yearning for redemption and strength, Zenith reluctantly embraces the enigmatic person's proposition.
Transported to a fantastical realm brimming with magic and mythical creatures, he discovers a unique system that aids him in gaining strength and unraveling the true purpose of his newfound journey.
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Hadiah
-- Hadiah diterima Status Power Mingguan
-- Peringkat
Power 
-- Power
stone Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
2Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Tulis ulasan
subjective reviews: it's give me Japanese Isekai type novel vibes which is I like it a lot. the mc personality is quiet calm and not annoying type Mc. the story line also very interesting. i hope the author can keep updating everyday!
This feels like a shameless plug, but hey, I've poured my heart and soul into this web novel, and Web Novel isn't giving it the recognition it deserves. So, let me tell you what's special about it. Beyond the typical system novel, my main character is an iskied to this world, adding a layer of uniqueness. I've tried to make some unique powers that I hope will blow your mind. Now, let's get real. The strong points? It's gotta be the dialogue. I've spent a lot of time making those conversations pop. But, I'll be honest, my action and background scenes could use some work. So, here's where I'm asking for help. If you've got suggestions on how to amp up the action and make those backgrounds more vivid, hit me up. And yes, I gave myself five stars on world-building. Go ahead, fight me on it. (Just kidding, please don't actually fight me.) Alright, enough rambling. If you're into the things I've mentioned, give it a read. And for those who've already dived in, hit me with your questions. Let's make this a conversation.