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Our MC Kylo Ray is a hardcore Star Wars Fan who was on his way home from a Star Wars meet up and died from a heat stroke being overweight and the sweltering summers heat.

Join Kylo as he journeys through the Star Wars Universe and becomes either the hope of all life throughout the Galaxy, or the one to bring it's downfall.

Disclaimer: I do not own any part of the Star Wars Franchise and all rights go to their respective owners. The only thing I own from this fanfic is my character and the creativity put into his Journey... Please support the Official Release of the actual Star Wars Movies

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southgamez

Shameless Author here to tell you that I don't know how long this will go on for, it might be 20 chapters or even 200, or maybe this doesn't get the attention I hope it does and won't take off past chapter 10 before it's a Drop, but for now I want to make this a full novel with at least 150 chaps

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amaturewriter

MC tries to be friendly with a sith, this dude assaults a chick he thought was dead,,,,behaves like an idiot and stays close to a sith women instead of running away...a retarded MC is trash........... like english and all that **** is decent but this retarded MC is trash

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JohnnyReever

Well written . Good character design . Hope this story doesnโ€™t get dropped like many others. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ

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DarthVegito

Author deleted my review about the mc trying to r*pe a girl and his first instinct is to start finger blasting her while sheโ€™s dead.... way to delete the review lol

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Brezer
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Total trash pretty much sums this story up. Writing is terrible. The mc is an idiot Save time and dont even try to read this. I have no idea what the 5 star raters were smoking but they were full of bs.

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Jeyrahmee_Sharp_3712

๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ.

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GQuasar

Pretty good, keep up the good work author-san.

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Steven_Beck_5008

This book keeps getting better and better I canโ€™t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so Iโ€™ll be able to read it ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ™

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ZaWarudoo

5 star because star wars and system ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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its_over_8000

..........................................................................................................................................................................................good story

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