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A man woke up in the strange darkness. He should be dead, but for some reason he was alive. And was locked up in the strange cage. Who did it? And why was he in this cage? He doesn't know, but he decided that he needed to get out of this place and find out who was behind his imprisonment.
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very interesting start though you should explain who's soul that is is it the commanders or is it the brothers or someone else's you kinda made it unknown as for the cliff hanger on 8 perfection
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Hi everyone, it's a shameless author. :) Though it's my first work, in my opinion, this story isn't bad. But I might be mistaken, so I would be really thankful if you left a review and comments with your opinion, which might be really helpful for me to improve my story. After all, I want to see this story to its very end.