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A Mangaka's Reincarnation [Indefinite Hiatus]
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A mangaka got reincarnated in an anime world as a trap.
I only own my OC the rest belong to the original owner.
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Soranon Berpartisipasi 25 -
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Pill_God Berpartisipasi 6 -
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Nekomiko_succubus Berpartisipasi 5
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Hmmmm what I can I say it a good fanfic and you know this fanfic is so cringe XD. So far so good for me but other people I don't know. Writing quality is okay(for now) 4 star Story development is to fast it need to slow down a bit. 3 star Character design is good cause it rare to see a fanfic where mc is a trap. 5 star Updating stability it's okay(for now). 4 star World Background so far it only have 3 anime in that world but maybe in the future their will be more and it good so far. 4 star Overall is 4 star it good fanfic but the story is to fast. Thank you for the hard work author and don't drop.
The story is too fast paced and it ignores character development to an extreme level plus it ignores the laws of the worlds it fusing so hard while giving the mc some bs power for no reason just for plot convenience. It feels like this story has no real direction as youre basically got a human thats stronger than two dragon gods in 17 years which shouldnt be possible as 1 humans have a slower power creep compared to the supernatural and 2 the whole 8x training speed thing you slapped unto the mc should only push him to peak high class or at the very least mid ultimate class as the amount of effort required to advance each rank should be substantial. anyways now that ive finished highlighting some bad parts lemme start highlighting some of the good parts i found so far so firstly the idea of the fic is honestly great its just that the author didnt expand more on the world background or the story development Secondly (Lastly) imma focus on grammar im glad to say there isnt any and if there is they were honestly easy enough to ignore as it doesnt prevent me from reading the fic .
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the story is quite entertaining to fill spare time, but unfortunately the author - san is too slow in updating chapters, i don't know if the author - san is busy or not but if you can please slow down in updating, if you can't, that's okay
update pls.............................................................................................................................................
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Welp I am not an expert at writing reviews but still I can point out your mistakes the first mistake is the story fast paced way too fast pace in my pov also we didn't get to have a proper interaction with his family and freinds most of the fanfic authors kill of the mc's parents/freinds right away but parents/freinds are important in your own life and for your mental support too they can be a major pillar in your life too which reminds you that you have somebody you need to protect it helps in a lot of charchter development also I recommend you to take your time and write your fics breifly with a clear mind character I honestly don't see trap quite often so it's kinda rare btw keep up the good work also this maybe my own selfish request but I hope that you don't make this huge harem cause I probably think you will have a hard time writing it.. so try to make the harem small if possible if you can pull off a huge harem you can go on. btw I am sorry for my bad grammar idk if I did it correctly or not ....