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A Long life in twilight
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There’s no background information…like who is the main character? What kind of changes did he bring to other characters development like Bella… is she more outgoing than the emotional brick in the movies? What does the mc look like? What is his gimmick (a werewolf, werebear, a shifter, a cold one, a Daylight Vampire, a Original Vampire, a Tribrid, etc… you get the point. Plus, work on that story description.. it’s kinda bland. Good Luck on fixing it to be better.