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A Hentai System in the World of Dungeon Ni Deai
4.56 (49 peringkat)
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Sinopse:
I was watching an episode of Dungeon Ni Deai before going to sleep.
Before I went to sleep, I wished "I would like to go to that world."
Having masturbated before bed, I went to The world of Dungeon Ni Deai with a rather peculiar system.
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CONTAINS MIND CONTROL FOR A SHORT ARC OF A FEW CHAPTERS AND THAT COULD BE CONSIDERED R4P3 EVEN IF IT IS NOT VIOLENT AT ALL.
BE AWARE!!!! AFTER THIS SHORT ARC YOU WILL NEVER HAVE ANYTHING LIKE THIS AGAIN!!!
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First impression is not good, there is a lot of information missing, the mc feels like a japanese beta mc mixed with self centered chinese mc, but the good side of those two isnโt there, grammar is okay, but the flow feels awkward
MC is a submissive that likes being dominated. Author killed off bell, but then some readers cried so he changed it, now he helps bell instead. He gives most of his money to Hestia to help pay of her debts, not sure if that includes bells knife, I stopped reading at that point.
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The first 50 chapter is good but then it come to hia level up which destroyed it Instead of shop became skill share I dont know whata the writer thinking about hia mc abilities chu choices
it's a very good fanfic :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
not well planned fanfic, i hope you can rewrite it to what was originally your idea and not be influenced by your readers unless it's for the better of the novel/novel go downhill. well ๐ for the effort keep writing and sorry for my grammar english is my third language after all.
To be honest I basically barely remember anything but the fact I'm still reading it means it's a good FF to read(in my opinion). SO read if you want.
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the writing is good and I enjoy the story for the most part, but he started mind controlling the girls to love him and then orders them around like little slaves. not too big a fan
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The setting and idea of the story are pretty good and the writing style is not too bad as well but it feels like the MC is a bit to scared all the time, acting like a weak Japanese mc and the interactions between characters feel completely empty like they are NPCs.
Muito boa obra, apesar de umas partes serem muito ruchadas e outras muito lentas, foi uma boa obra.. espero que tenha mais (escrevendo isso depois de ler o capรญtulo 85)
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Good story. Continue writing the story and take all girls. It is cool how he is getting skils for f*****g women. I hope you do not drop this fanfiction
Tbh i won't read the novel (i don't plan to) but i'm leaving 5/5 just bcs author seems to care about what the readers say and wish to improve, and *for me* it is quite a rare thing to see here, there are a lot of good authors a lot of toxic ones too (i mean in personality, there are some toxic one's w/ good novels too), but so far only some of them want to improve, so good luck on that and all the best for u. (Even if you want to improve trough reviews, there are a lot of toxic readers too, so be careful to not lose the drive to write.)
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This is the first time I've written fanfic and it's also the first time I've written h3nt41 content, so it probably won't be very good. I will try to get better and better at describing the scenes, but it's a little difficult xD Thanks to everyone who is reading! This story doesn't deserve 5 stars, but I'll give it since I'm the author lol