Bab 9: not a chapter but some thoughts..
well this novel is not gaining much readers , way lesser than I had thought . it's not a problem though as those who are reading it are awesome ones . thank you .
from your comments i can see that some of you find something's confusing like timeline and more more bloodline . let me explain a little within my meager abilities then .
1. timeline ..
the timeline is 4 years before the start of 2nd great shinobi world war . I dont remember the exact time and only know that minato was 10 when he graduated and soon was sent to war . so mc being the same age as minato , you can understand the timeline a little now.
I'm sorry if I'm wrong though because I have not watched the naruto anime since few years ago so my memory is vague . I'm not confident in many details. but its my own fanfiction so some things can be adjusted . at least that's what I think .
2. more more bloodline
this one is a unique power . I dont know how many of you have watched the anime one piece. in some filler arc or movie , I dont remember exactly but there was a character called Brynndi World who had eaten more more fruit or Japanese translation which is moa moa no mi.
the meaning is increasing human. basically fruit enables user to increase the size, speed or strenght of something he touches including his own body till the limit of 100 folds . I liked this ability very much so thought of using it in a naruto fanfiction .
so the more more bloodline of mc ren hatake is basically the same as fruit but with some twists I added . he needs chara to activate his powers and I thought it would not look good if i made him able to use 100 fold powers from the start . so i decided to limit the abilities which he would unlock more in time with collecting exp points like those rpg games and leveling up the bloodline .
I'm sure that most of you guys will clear your doubts after reading this explanation of mine. if some still dont understand something then they can always leave a comment .
but please dont trash talk like mc is annoying or whatever you wrote in those comments . I dont have confidence in my work but still I like the character development . if you have any ideas to make the novel more interesting then please free to comment . I will try to add somethings if I find them interesting enough.
so those who only want to write bad reviews or comments , can choose to not follow or read the novel and write one on their own . it seriously takes a lot of time and effort to write one though . I'm just writing for fun anyway so do not welcome harsh criticism.
last thing I want to tell is that please try to read sypnosis before reading the novel for first time . you will have some better understanding then ... thank you !
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