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This story is pure nonsense. Nothing is explained. Things happen out of nowhere. More plot holes than the original. And it all feels like it was written by a 12 year old that just keep typing what came to mind without once rereading what he wrote. This was a real chore to read and every chapter just left me thinking 'how in the frick did we get here?' The story goes like this. *Appears in Konoha during invasion without explanation* - *Is identified as a member of the Uchiha and no one finds it strange* - *As a Chunnin stabs Orochimaru in the heart with poison that he never had in the first place* - *Becomes a 'Hero' of Konoha that is recognized by everyone* Do I even need to describe more than that?
this is old story. already end in patreon its about Shiro transmigrate to ninja world and got fussion cheat. able to fuse ninjutsu. if you like story please throw stone [img=proud]
historia lixo, a unica boa é o sistema e a tradução, a história em si é um lixo sem sentido e da fica a impressão que o autor so queria gastar o tempo dos leitores
This story is pure nonsense. Nothing is explained. Things happen out of nowhere. More plot holes than the original. And it all feels like it was written by a 12 year old that just keep typing what came to mind without once rereading what he wrote. This was a real chore to read and every chapter just left me thinking 'how in the frick did we get here?' The story goes like this. *Appears in Konoha during invasion without explanation* - *Is identified as a member of the Uchiha and no one finds it strange* - *As a Chunnin stabs Orochimaru in the heart with poison that he never had in the first place* - *Becomes a 'Hero' of Konoha that is recognized by everyone* Do I even need to describe more than that?
this is old story. already end in patreon its about Shiro transmigrate to ninja world and got fussion cheat. able to fuse ninjutsu. if you like story please throw stone [img=proud]
historia lixo, a unica boa é o sistema e a tradução, a história em si é um lixo sem sentido e da fica a impressão que o autor so queria gastar o tempo dos leitores