A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)

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AnshumanMishra

Shameless Author review here. Don't know where I will go with this

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kiritonaruto

great art work and all but you made him too strong in the beginning only there is not mush growth rather than making him OP like this you could have made his wishes his potential make him workhard to get stronger like maybe essence of blank etc which would have given him potential rather than power sice you have idea of those huge beast things you should have put the time-line when magic was in it's peak like when age of heroes or period when Valyrians and ryonish were in their peak and may be made him an stark so he would have legitimate right to rule north also rather then making him some crazy men world domination idea you could make him an adventurous spirit wanting to explore the world first then other universes and multiverse him building an great empire or become world reader should be his side affect of his adventures and great on characters but not too many women or it will ruin the already ruined world.

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Dex_Deer

great book already invested i the first chap

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DaoistivnwOw

may this continue and not dropped [img=strong]

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Cush_550

chapter 16 is very good please more thx.

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Vinsm0k3r

pretty good shit, I don't know the way the author wants to take the story but the start is pretty good, for me at least

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Silversurfer77

I absolutely love this fic, great paced and wonderful power fantasy fulfillment. 10/10 my friend!

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Madara1996

This is really a solid story!! I know people have different taste and genre but give this gem a go!!

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Koob

I like the story so far but why did you change the weighting style part way? The novel suddenly turned into a script. by script, i mean <Character name: Comment'. i really don't like this style of writing and if it continues. i'll probably drop this novel.