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Wow, what a strong start to a story that I believe has the potential to become one of the most popular books on this platform. I love the use of multiple POVs, as it allows readers to understand the feelings of other characters rather than focusing solely on the MC. 10/10! I highly recommend this novel!
It looks like the author has great direction and drive for this story. POV switches are well on-point with each perspective not being wasted on characters and that the story progresses well under a well written world. Not to mention that the writing quality is highly commendable, I can see this novel going up in a few months time. Keep it up author!
The varied perspectives of the characters add depth to the narrative, while the gradual development of the world settings enhances the story.
Interesting change of pace on the Isekai/Reincarnation. I like the idea of the MC changing when granted another life/chance. Will read more, keep it up!
Very well written world and power system, and the Mc isn’t annoy, you should definitely read this novel.
I highly recommend reading this novels, it has amazing story, characters, world building. I really love the different perspectives of each characters, and their interactions. Nice job author✨
The author is consistent and the story is nice and enjoyable 😊 I recommend it
The MC is likeable and intelligent The plot is well paced and the author is consistent I recommend it to everyone
The reincarnation trope is well handled without any drama or inconsistency The MC is intelligent and likeable and the story is good paced. I recommend everyone to try it
wow, the story is starting to get intense, I'm loving this novel, it's amazing, fast paced, good character development😘, it is everything I love.❤️ good job Author you're amazing 🤩
This book really has potential . One thing that I love is the multiple pov used. It didn't make the story weird
Peak! ✋😐🤚 What a great novel, I love how the plot and characters develop. More chp pls
The author's pen pulled me in from the first chapter! It's refreshing to see an isekai with stellar prose, comedic moments and dark twists. I can't wait to see where the story goes!
Alright I’m ready to do a review. I am excited to support this project, it is very interesting and I want to see where it goes. Little Ethan, young overlord has captured my heart the cutie patootie. 🥰
Ok! The novel is truly amazing! Only the summary says a lot about her, the chapters are not boring at all and God always ends with enthusiasm makes you read the next chapter. Lift the hat for the author
We seem to be off to a very good start though you might want to take more time to develop some of the character relationships. You've got the concept down, just let it simmer a little more.
Wow, this story has me totally hooked. Even with just a few chapters out, I'm already in love with it. The pacing is spot on, speeding up and slowing down at just the right moments to feel completely natural. Great job, keep it up! This novel is amazing I highly recommend giving it a read!
Ethan’s thrilling journey from disciplined soldier to unrestrained conqueror in a brutal world is gripping! Rich world-building, intense battles, and unyielding ambition captivate throughout. I recommended this!
this is very suitable with my taste. word is simple but not plain. story progression is not slow also not to fast. typical MC is what I like the most, not to brutal (for now at least, I don't know yet), and loving family is also good.
The storyline is well paced and the slight slow build up makes the premise and the characters real. The author updates the story regularly and I have high hopes for this.
I will start with what I dislike about the novel. 1st - the switch between view points - I think instead of using 1st on supporting characters, it should move to third, so we can have an insight on what the other person is thinking. 2nd - Too info-bumps, I forgot all the locations in chapter 3, and I think it first the volume zero category. 3rd - Clara is forgotten. What I like. The first kiss is well done. The pacing is good at my level, although slow on most parts. The update stability shows that the author is passionate about his book, and the possibility of him not dropping it is high. 🔥🔥🔥🔥
The front cover actually got me into this. Great read so far. just added to my library 😁
The first chapter is interesting, and Ethan’s story is off to a good start. His new life and emotions are well shown, but the scenes with his mother felt strange for a first chapter. A better warning or a slower build-up to these themes might help. Overall, I’m curious to see what happens next!
Author def loves cliffhangers. The novel itself has superb prose and interesting premise. Pace is good as well, but it's not rushed. Changes in POVs are rare on this platform, and it depends on the reader.
I'm yet to read it but the synopsis is great and catchy. I will start reading right away. Let's gooo🔥🔥🔥
Author here! This is rewrite of my first novel and if you read be assured that this is not a casual attempt. So, please like and share my story if you enjoy it. Your comments and support will motivate me and I would try my best to be consistent so support this novel and share it with your friends. PS: If you have any suggestions or opinions on the novel characters or its world building do write in the comments and I would definitely consider it
Wow, what a strong start to a story that I believe has the potential to become one of the most popular books on this platform. I love the use of multiple POVs, as it allows readers to understand the feelings of other characters rather than focusing solely on the MC. 10/10! I highly recommend this novel!
It looks like the author has great direction and drive for this story. POV switches are well on-point with each perspective not being wasted on characters and that the story progresses well under a well written world. Not to mention that the writing quality is highly commendable, I can see this novel going up in a few months time. Keep it up author!
The varied perspectives of the characters add depth to the narrative, while the gradual development of the world settings enhances the story.
Interesting change of pace on the Isekai/Reincarnation. I like the idea of the MC changing when granted another life/chance. Will read more, keep it up!
Very well written world and power system, and the Mc isn’t annoy, you should definitely read this novel.
I highly recommend reading this novels, it has amazing story, characters, world building. I really love the different perspectives of each characters, and their interactions. Nice job author✨
The author is consistent and the story is nice and enjoyable 😊 I recommend it
The MC is likeable and intelligent The plot is well paced and the author is consistent I recommend it to everyone
The reincarnation trope is well handled without any drama or inconsistency The MC is intelligent and likeable and the story is good paced. I recommend everyone to try it
wow, the story is starting to get intense, I'm loving this novel, it's amazing, fast paced, good character development😘, it is everything I love.❤️ good job Author you're amazing 🤩
This book really has potential . One thing that I love is the multiple pov used. It didn't make the story weird
Peak! ✋😐🤚 What a great novel, I love how the plot and characters develop. More chp pls
The author's pen pulled me in from the first chapter! It's refreshing to see an isekai with stellar prose, comedic moments and dark twists. I can't wait to see where the story goes!
Alright I’m ready to do a review. I am excited to support this project, it is very interesting and I want to see where it goes. Little Ethan, young overlord has captured my heart the cutie patootie. 🥰
Ok! The novel is truly amazing! Only the summary says a lot about her, the chapters are not boring at all and God always ends with enthusiasm makes you read the next chapter. Lift the hat for the author
We seem to be off to a very good start though you might want to take more time to develop some of the character relationships. You've got the concept down, just let it simmer a little more.
Wow, this story has me totally hooked. Even with just a few chapters out, I'm already in love with it. The pacing is spot on, speeding up and slowing down at just the right moments to feel completely natural. Great job, keep it up! This novel is amazing I highly recommend giving it a read!
Ethan’s thrilling journey from disciplined soldier to unrestrained conqueror in a brutal world is gripping! Rich world-building, intense battles, and unyielding ambition captivate throughout. I recommended this!
this is very suitable with my taste. word is simple but not plain. story progression is not slow also not to fast. typical MC is what I like the most, not to brutal (for now at least, I don't know yet), and loving family is also good.
The storyline is well paced and the slight slow build up makes the premise and the characters real. The author updates the story regularly and I have high hopes for this.
I will start with what I dislike about the novel. 1st - the switch between view points - I think instead of using 1st on supporting characters, it should move to third, so we can have an insight on what the other person is thinking. 2nd - Too info-bumps, I forgot all the locations in chapter 3, and I think it first the volume zero category. 3rd - Clara is forgotten. What I like. The first kiss is well done. The pacing is good at my level, although slow on most parts. The update stability shows that the author is passionate about his book, and the possibility of him not dropping it is high. 🔥🔥🔥🔥
The front cover actually got me into this. Great read so far. just added to my library 😁
The first chapter is interesting, and Ethan’s story is off to a good start. His new life and emotions are well shown, but the scenes with his mother felt strange for a first chapter. A better warning or a slower build-up to these themes might help. Overall, I’m curious to see what happens next!
Author def loves cliffhangers. The novel itself has superb prose and interesting premise. Pace is good as well, but it's not rushed. Changes in POVs are rare on this platform, and it depends on the reader.
I'm yet to read it but the synopsis is great and catchy. I will start reading right away. Let's gooo🔥🔥🔥
Author here! This is rewrite of my first novel and if you read be assured that this is not a casual attempt. So, please like and share my story if you enjoy it. Your comments and support will motivate me and I would try my best to be consistent so support this novel and share it with your friends. PS: If you have any suggestions or opinions on the novel characters or its world building do write in the comments and I would definitely consider it