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So, for those who want to read, here is my review (Although I didn't like the way this fanfiction went through, you can like it.): 1. I started to dislike this fanfiction because of the feeling of Uncanny Valley this FF book gave me. The MC first was human, then he reincarnated as a Symbiote then he kills and consumes Peter Parker (memories, feelings, everything.) and starts to... live as Peter Parker? Dude... It was almost as if I was reading The Thing Marvel Edition. If MC consumes Tony Stark in the future, is he Tony Stark too? 2. The second reason is that... He went after the girlfriend of the guy he just consumed and became him as if it was a matter of fact... Bro, it was creepy, to say the least. It felt like reading that comic where Dr. Octopus swapped minds with Peter Parker and became Spider-Man while leaving Peter to die in his old body... ( A comic I don't remember the name but I hate it so much I still remember. ) This is also strange since I don't feel the same way when reincarnations happen in other Fanfiction, I guess I convinced myself that the MC is simply the past life of the current body or something. This FF is quite good if you don't feel the uncanny feeling or just ignore it.
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Honestamente no me gustó, principalmente porque el MC toma la identidad de Peter, solo leí hasta el capitulo 9,asi qué no se si en algún momento se descubrirá la verdad de su engaño o no, pero esta novela se salta varios puntos. 1.ya no es humano, tecnicamente renació y aquí no se tuvo en cuenta como la mente de un ser se ve influenciada por su propio cuerpo. 2. Devorar a Peter fue completamente innecesario, casi forzado, aunque no me molesta, pero si me molesta que luego por culpa, joder, culpa de lo que básicamente ya sabía decidió tomar dicha identidad, preferiría que dieran por muerto a Peter o algo Dejando de lado mi inconformidad con el desarrollo del MC, la historia parece decente, la escritura es buena y el avance de las relaciones al menos con gwen son buenos
Si supuestamente "devora" a Peter con la habilidad "depredador" no tiene porque mantener el "ego". Carne, Alma... Todo lo que compone a "Peter" debio convertirse en "energía " para el MC, y entonces que mantenga el ego y los pensamientos de peter como propios se vuelven tonto y aburrido 😂.
Uma historia simples, mas para fans do homem aranha um deleite. Nem sempre simples é ruim, só espero que o autor não se perca na escrita! Seria triste se o protagonista virasse um ditador.
I’m too lazy to write a lot so I’ll write briefly the main character is so stupid and mentally retarded that he was swallowed up by the consciousness of Peter Parker and he is now the usual cowardly and clumsy Peter, all that remains of the reincarnator is that he has only imbalanced skills as a gift to Peter Parker who because of his stupid heart the hero does not use it to the maximum
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it's a great read and everything I wanted in a spiderman novel with multiverse so yeah too op
I don't want this novel to just suddenly be dropped because of low ratings so I'm giving it 5 stars. The eating Peter thing is a bit turn off and sometimes MC can be a bit evil, but still. Story is interesting so...
Please more!! It’s awesome and everything I want just a nice story to read please continue updating regularly and don’t drop!
MC: SI Peter Parker Rating: 7/10 Harem: Gwen, Jean, Wanda The idea and realization is good. But I don't like the description and introduction to the story that MC will be an OC just to eat Peter in the end and then become him.
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bro it feels like similar to marvel i am symbiote fanfic but different girls in harem. But i say you to add a lot of seegs for the novel to get views . because in symbiote novel seggs is major for the harem development.
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I am enjoying the book so far. MC transmigrates as a symbiote and immediately consumes/merges with peter parker. He basically consumes peter and his memories then assumes his identity and life but claims its a "merge" to everyone else. There are some lets say "villain" lapses but overall the story is great so far. I don't like that Gwen wasn't informed when he merged with Jean. Though I hope she assumes it will happen or already knows but it wasn't written. I hate reveals like the one I am hoping author is not planning on doing.
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Em poucas palavras a sua história está incrível realmente boa é raro encontrar histórias onde o protagonista é um simbionte você tá trabalhando bem com essa história o ritmo está muito bom só o que falta é mais capítulos tirando isso tá muito bom
Un muy buen fanfic , espero no lo dejes caer 👍 Aunque el ritmo de la novela es algo rapido , eso Esta bien me alegra saber que el prota no se estancara Con unos mismos poderes por un buen rato ahora que Esta en la prision de villanos de spider-man.
I don't know what u want to write , it looks like random story where si just follows the trend nothing new same thing just repeat. You could have written good fanfic without him joining the same mcu storyline ,
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So, for those who want to read, here is my review (Although I didn't like the way this fanfiction went through, you can like it.): 1. I started to dislike this fanfiction because of the feeling of Uncanny Valley this FF book gave me. The MC first was human, then he reincarnated as a Symbiote then he kills and consumes Peter Parker (memories, feelings, everything.) and starts to... live as Peter Parker? Dude... It was almost as if I was reading The Thing Marvel Edition. If MC consumes Tony Stark in the future, is he Tony Stark too? 2. The second reason is that... He went after the girlfriend of the guy he just consumed and became him as if it was a matter of fact... Bro, it was creepy, to say the least. It felt like reading that comic where Dr. Octopus swapped minds with Peter Parker and became Spider-Man while leaving Peter to die in his old body... ( A comic I don't remember the name but I hate it so much I still remember. ) This is also strange since I don't feel the same way when reincarnations happen in other Fanfiction, I guess I convinced myself that the MC is simply the past life of the current body or something. This FF is quite good if you don't feel the uncanny feeling or just ignore it.
Membuka SPOILER Honestamente no me gustó, principalmente porque el MC toma la identidad de Peter, solo leí hasta el capitulo 9,asi qué no se si en algún momento se descubrirá la verdad de su engaño o no, pero esta novela se salta varios puntos. 1.ya no es humano, tecnicamente renació y aquí no se tuvo en cuenta como la mente de un ser se ve influenciada por su propio cuerpo. 2. Devorar a Peter fue completamente innecesario, casi forzado, aunque no me molesta, pero si me molesta que luego por culpa, joder, culpa de lo que básicamente ya sabía decidió tomar dicha identidad, preferiría que dieran por muerto a Peter o algo Dejando de lado mi inconformidad con el desarrollo del MC, la historia parece decente, la escritura es buena y el avance de las relaciones al menos con gwen son buenos
Si supuestamente "devora" a Peter con la habilidad "depredador" no tiene porque mantener el "ego". Carne, Alma... Todo lo que compone a "Peter" debio convertirse en "energía " para el MC, y entonces que mantenga el ego y los pensamientos de peter como propios se vuelven tonto y aburrido 😂.
Uma historia simples, mas para fans do homem aranha um deleite. Nem sempre simples é ruim, só espero que o autor não se perca na escrita! Seria triste se o protagonista virasse um ditador.
I’m too lazy to write a lot so I’ll write briefly the main character is so stupid and mentally retarded that he was swallowed up by the consciousness of Peter Parker and he is now the usual cowardly and clumsy Peter, all that remains of the reincarnator is that he has only imbalanced skills as a gift to Peter Parker who because of his stupid heart the hero does not use it to the maximum
I LOVE THIS PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP
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it's a great read and everything I wanted in a spiderman novel with multiverse so yeah too op
I don't want this novel to just suddenly be dropped because of low ratings so I'm giving it 5 stars. The eating Peter thing is a bit turn off and sometimes MC can be a bit evil, but still. Story is interesting so...
Please more!! It’s awesome and everything I want just a nice story to read please continue updating regularly and don’t drop!
MC: SI Peter Parker Rating: 7/10 Harem: Gwen, Jean, Wanda The idea and realization is good. But I don't like the description and introduction to the story that MC will be an OC just to eat Peter in the end and then become him.
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bro it feels like similar to marvel i am symbiote fanfic but different girls in harem. But i say you to add a lot of seegs for the novel to get views . because in symbiote novel seggs is major for the harem development.
insanamente boa ksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssskkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk................................................................................................
I am enjoying the book so far. MC transmigrates as a symbiote and immediately consumes/merges with peter parker. He basically consumes peter and his memories then assumes his identity and life but claims its a "merge" to everyone else. There are some lets say "villain" lapses but overall the story is great so far. I don't like that Gwen wasn't informed when he merged with Jean. Though I hope she assumes it will happen or already knows but it wasn't written. I hate reveals like the one I am hoping author is not planning on doing.
Membuka SPOILER Em poucas palavras a sua história está incrível realmente boa é raro encontrar histórias onde o protagonista é um simbionte você tá trabalhando bem com essa história o ritmo está muito bom só o que falta é mais capítulos tirando isso tá muito bom
Un muy buen fanfic , espero no lo dejes caer 👍 Aunque el ritmo de la novela es algo rapido , eso Esta bien me alegra saber que el prota no se estancara Con unos mismos poderes por un buen rato ahora que Esta en la prision de villanos de spider-man.
I don't know what u want to write , it looks like random story where si just follows the trend nothing new same thing just repeat. You could have written good fanfic without him joining the same mcu storyline ,
love it so far keep up with the good work.