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I am loving it so far.............................................................................................................................
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It is funny how a scammer thinks he is a normal working citizen. You should have been killed, nothing more. But because an entity of the author's choosing chooses to do this shit he has a chance to do something, aka plot.
It's interesting until now. ..........................................................................................................................
I understand the author’s decision not to include a harem in their story because of a lack of personal experience in relationships, but I feel this might unnecessarily limit the creative potential of the work. Fiction is, after all, about exploring worlds and experiences that might be far from the author’s own reality. Characters often go through things the author has never experienced—like going to war, killing enemies, or facing extreme challenges. In this case, the main character is already portrayed as someone skilled in deceiving women, which shows that complex relationships are already part of the story. I think the author should focus on what feels right for the narrative, even if it means stepping outside their comfort zone. Making mistakes is part of growth, both in life and in writing. Even the greatest authors have made missteps, but that didn’t stop them from continuing and improving. What matters most is the willingness to try, to take risks, and to tell the story in the way they believe is best. Fiction exists to push boundaries, including the author's own.
Simply a delightful piece of work, the author really dedicated himself to the story and managed to brilliantly put a chronological order in the story, the only sad thing is that there is no harem. Author, if you see this comment, please think about putting a harem in the story, I know there are thousands of stories where putting a harem in it looks horrible, but this one seems like an exception, it seems like has a lot of potential to create a beautifully crafted romance story, you author doesn't have to feel stressed because of the Romance, the way you write already gives an indication that you could exceptionally develop a harem. You have my support, wait until 1 in the morning so I can give you 2 stones of power.
Good idea but poorly executed. This novel would be better if the author wrote it more slowly and with more details, to explain more about the characters'thought process. Some plots better not be added, for example that Batman thing in Demacia, that is cringe and not funny(for me and some people in the comments that I see). Anyway, keep on writing and practice, learn from mistakes I hope I will have a chance to read a great novel from you.
Realmente até agora muito bom e agradável de ler, continue com o bom trabalho. Só lança pra gente uns 40 capítulos só pra eu testar uma coisa.
ill set my expectations low for now but you can change my mind incase u dont drop this fic
best new fanfic out rn tbh idk how it’s not #1 alr everything above it is ethier a translation or something boring this actually made me look up runeterra lore, I didn’t even do that for the Netflix series
Its really interesting and good reading and its great that it doesnt focus mainly on Piltover. The only downside (for me) is that the MC moves between the regions too much and that the MC's goals are little bit unclear (besides saving the world but it may be resolved in future chapters).
The most beautiful fanfiction I have ever seen is set in the world of Runnettera. Although there are few examples, writing fanfic on topics that are naturally few is more challenging and requires more literary talent. You are doing well, congratulations, I recommend that you think of the story as a journey, mc, not only in known places and known characters, but also in communication and friendship with unknown 'OCs', let them illuminate some of them with the flame of hope they represent. It would be better if the development of your power were within a certain logic and stability instead of instant power-ups such as plot armor and power-ups. Don't leave the story half-done, write even if it doesn't fit you, publish it and see the good and bad criticisms, but don't act with the wishes and desires of the reader, some want one thing, some want another, there is no end. Be selfish like Gege :) Write without rushing until you finish but regularly, maybe after reading the criticisms and thinking about it yourself, you can say it would be better this way and go back and edit it, I hope you will do great things as you gain experience, I think it is 7.5/10 but I am giving it 5 stars because there is not much written. Nice storyline, nice character design, character development was not complete, the feeling of Mark's character change was not fully conveyed, I think it would have been better if you had handled the feeling of having to fight to the death while being in a modern life one moment, the war desire of the Hamma race and the modern human mentality and fears. Your update speed makes me happy, I enjoy reading the interactions of the main character with the supporting characters and how these interactions affect the supporting characters.
Whilst the game of League may bring pain and suffering the show, trailers and lore are the opposite. Glad someone is doing a fanfic even with all of the factors to consider. He also be collecting all the baddies as well so that’s a plus :P
At the moment i think this story is good and im excited to see where the author will go with this story. The grammar is good and and the protagonist seems to be okay, even though there isnt any mention of his sayan powers like the zenkai boost or ki, either way he got the super sayan so i can be wrong and doesnt have any of that and only gets the transformation idk. Keep up the good work, and i hope this doesnt get dropped.[img=update]
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so far, it's a great fanfic, but I fear that the author will stop updating in the future or slow his updates, so I shall set my expectations to 0
I love it, the fact the you started on Noxus instead of Piltover (Arcane) I can see that you know a loot about the Runeterra lore, and you did not go the easy route, you are doing great
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Muy buena historia me gusta el desarrollo y la dirección que está tomando uno de los pocos fanfics que hay de league of legends espero próximamente más capitulos
It's amazing and I love it. It has good fights,character development and representation. The story development is quite fast paced. And there's very few league of legends fanfiction out there. Absolutely recommended.
HAREM? ...............................................................................................................................................
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Lol fanfic the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Omae mo shinderu ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's already off to a great start, I'm hoping for romance ..................................................................................................
This is great and the fact that the amount of lore characters have in this world is ridiculous from Leafgue of Legends to Legends of Runeterra sure there is a bit of eh like the batman part but overall this is great tho you need to have your character a bit more known not just him going around getting stronger it's the reason the batman part seems off
I am loving it so far.............................................................................................................................
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It is funny how a scammer thinks he is a normal working citizen. You should have been killed, nothing more. But because an entity of the author's choosing chooses to do this shit he has a chance to do something, aka plot.
It's interesting until now. ..........................................................................................................................
I understand the author’s decision not to include a harem in their story because of a lack of personal experience in relationships, but I feel this might unnecessarily limit the creative potential of the work. Fiction is, after all, about exploring worlds and experiences that might be far from the author’s own reality. Characters often go through things the author has never experienced—like going to war, killing enemies, or facing extreme challenges. In this case, the main character is already portrayed as someone skilled in deceiving women, which shows that complex relationships are already part of the story. I think the author should focus on what feels right for the narrative, even if it means stepping outside their comfort zone. Making mistakes is part of growth, both in life and in writing. Even the greatest authors have made missteps, but that didn’t stop them from continuing and improving. What matters most is the willingness to try, to take risks, and to tell the story in the way they believe is best. Fiction exists to push boundaries, including the author's own.
Simply a delightful piece of work, the author really dedicated himself to the story and managed to brilliantly put a chronological order in the story, the only sad thing is that there is no harem. Author, if you see this comment, please think about putting a harem in the story, I know there are thousands of stories where putting a harem in it looks horrible, but this one seems like an exception, it seems like has a lot of potential to create a beautifully crafted romance story, you author doesn't have to feel stressed because of the Romance, the way you write already gives an indication that you could exceptionally develop a harem. You have my support, wait until 1 in the morning so I can give you 2 stones of power.
Good idea but poorly executed. This novel would be better if the author wrote it more slowly and with more details, to explain more about the characters'thought process. Some plots better not be added, for example that Batman thing in Demacia, that is cringe and not funny(for me and some people in the comments that I see). Anyway, keep on writing and practice, learn from mistakes I hope I will have a chance to read a great novel from you.
Realmente até agora muito bom e agradável de ler, continue com o bom trabalho. Só lança pra gente uns 40 capítulos só pra eu testar uma coisa.
ill set my expectations low for now but you can change my mind incase u dont drop this fic
best new fanfic out rn tbh idk how it’s not #1 alr everything above it is ethier a translation or something boring this actually made me look up runeterra lore, I didn’t even do that for the Netflix series
Its really interesting and good reading and its great that it doesnt focus mainly on Piltover. The only downside (for me) is that the MC moves between the regions too much and that the MC's goals are little bit unclear (besides saving the world but it may be resolved in future chapters).
The most beautiful fanfiction I have ever seen is set in the world of Runnettera. Although there are few examples, writing fanfic on topics that are naturally few is more challenging and requires more literary talent. You are doing well, congratulations, I recommend that you think of the story as a journey, mc, not only in known places and known characters, but also in communication and friendship with unknown 'OCs', let them illuminate some of them with the flame of hope they represent. It would be better if the development of your power were within a certain logic and stability instead of instant power-ups such as plot armor and power-ups. Don't leave the story half-done, write even if it doesn't fit you, publish it and see the good and bad criticisms, but don't act with the wishes and desires of the reader, some want one thing, some want another, there is no end. Be selfish like Gege :) Write without rushing until you finish but regularly, maybe after reading the criticisms and thinking about it yourself, you can say it would be better this way and go back and edit it, I hope you will do great things as you gain experience, I think it is 7.5/10 but I am giving it 5 stars because there is not much written. Nice storyline, nice character design, character development was not complete, the feeling of Mark's character change was not fully conveyed, I think it would have been better if you had handled the feeling of having to fight to the death while being in a modern life one moment, the war desire of the Hamma race and the modern human mentality and fears. Your update speed makes me happy, I enjoy reading the interactions of the main character with the supporting characters and how these interactions affect the supporting characters.
Whilst the game of League may bring pain and suffering the show, trailers and lore are the opposite. Glad someone is doing a fanfic even with all of the factors to consider. He also be collecting all the baddies as well so that’s a plus :P
At the moment i think this story is good and im excited to see where the author will go with this story. The grammar is good and and the protagonist seems to be okay, even though there isnt any mention of his sayan powers like the zenkai boost or ki, either way he got the super sayan so i can be wrong and doesnt have any of that and only gets the transformation idk. Keep up the good work, and i hope this doesnt get dropped.[img=update]
Membuka SPOILER so far, it's a great fanfic, but I fear that the author will stop updating in the future or slow his updates, so I shall set my expectations to 0
I love it, the fact the you started on Noxus instead of Piltover (Arcane) I can see that you know a loot about the Runeterra lore, and you did not go the easy route, you are doing great
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Muy buena historia me gusta el desarrollo y la dirección que está tomando uno de los pocos fanfics que hay de league of legends espero próximamente más capitulos
It's amazing and I love it. It has good fights,character development and representation. The story development is quite fast paced. And there's very few league of legends fanfiction out there. Absolutely recommended.
HAREM? ...............................................................................................................................................
Membuka SPOILER Lol fanfic the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Omae mo shinderu ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's already off to a great start, I'm hoping for romance ..................................................................................................
This is great and the fact that the amount of lore characters have in this world is ridiculous from Leafgue of Legends to Legends of Runeterra sure there is a bit of eh like the batman part but overall this is great tho you need to have your character a bit more known not just him going around getting stronger it's the reason the batman part seems off