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It is a really great book, but later on it seems some chapters get mixed up from 90 onwards.
currently reading chapter 62 but still confused about mc being able to do magic or not . and i am not talking about skills given by the system .... i am confused about harry Potter worlds magic .... can mc do that magic ? i didn't get any clear indication (even if there's any subtle indication pls point it out).
Nice Overall. Sometimes Mixes Up pronouns ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
its great ........................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love that the main character is Dudley, also that Harry now feels apart of the family. Hope to see more updates
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Yes, it's damn Chad, but what the hell is being 1.80 tall when you're 12? What the hell brothers,In the same way, I only like the rhythm and how everything goes. If it's a translation, it's a good job, and if it's an original work, screw the author, try including Dafne Grengrass for a reason, they always use it when the MC is in the snake house.
Well, the character design is a little off but Duddly is the MC so it's still good. Its good, the translation just needs to improve a little
Not bad! I thought it was your common HP fanfic but this one give it a nice twist, having Dusley as the MC is of course the main point, but the story's pace and the translation is quite good.
It's interesting, while it needs some improvement in the translation, it is very, very good, at least in the 3 chapters that I have seen, I'm waiting for more chapters to see how this fic goes!
This stretched and forced comedy novel is getting on my nerves i read till 75 ch and MC fellow didn’t get any magic and his tashy system has no presence and no functions it just pops up randomly 20 chapters apart maybe and doesn’t give anything constructive. What does magic system even mean if it doesn’t give anything magical. Bro doesn’t even have enough magic to cast a first year spell. You should just change the name of story to ‘A muggle in hogwats’ that would be better. This novel makes my head hurt.
It is a really great book, but later on it seems some chapters get mixed up from 90 onwards.
currently reading chapter 62 but still confused about mc being able to do magic or not . and i am not talking about skills given by the system .... i am confused about harry Potter worlds magic .... can mc do that magic ? i didn't get any clear indication (even if there's any subtle indication pls point it out).
Nice Overall. Sometimes Mixes Up pronouns ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
its great ........................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love that the main character is Dudley, also that Harry now feels apart of the family. Hope to see more updates
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Yes, it's damn Chad, but what the hell is being 1.80 tall when you're 12? What the hell brothers,In the same way, I only like the rhythm and how everything goes. If it's a translation, it's a good job, and if it's an original work, screw the author, try including Dafne Grengrass for a reason, they always use it when the MC is in the snake house.
Well, the character design is a little off but Duddly is the MC so it's still good. Its good, the translation just needs to improve a little
Not bad! I thought it was your common HP fanfic but this one give it a nice twist, having Dusley as the MC is of course the main point, but the story's pace and the translation is quite good.
It's interesting, while it needs some improvement in the translation, it is very, very good, at least in the 3 chapters that I have seen, I'm waiting for more chapters to see how this fic goes!
This stretched and forced comedy novel is getting on my nerves i read till 75 ch and MC fellow didn’t get any magic and his tashy system has no presence and no functions it just pops up randomly 20 chapters apart maybe and doesn’t give anything constructive. What does magic system even mean if it doesn’t give anything magical. Bro doesn’t even have enough magic to cast a first year spell. You should just change the name of story to ‘A muggle in hogwats’ that would be better. This novel makes my head hurt.