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author. The first ch itself contains multiple povs - first person, third person, which makes no sense. Honestly, it is tiring to read chapter 1 itself. Please try to change it 🙂
Quite the interesting story we've got here, can't wait to see how the MC's journey unfolds within the long-run in the world of MHA. It's a must read for sure.
Not much to go on of and while the starting is a bit iffy, the premise looks promising. Hope it gets better from now on. 5 stars on probation.
Not much of fresh idea in the MHA space but still one that catches ur attention. I'm honestly hoping the author does a decent job with this fic, no pressure tho
I can't wait to see how OP he's gonna be in the future.. I meant if he's got sand quirk, then I guess he'll be a logia type like croco-boy from one piece😮💯💥💥❤️🔥
Mandatory author review here. First of all, I have not the slightest clue what to do concerning most of the things in the story but that doesn't mean it'll be a casual wishfulfilment or a zero plot/sense story. Yuta's ability is a cross between Sandman from DC and Croco-boy from One Piece, so nothing explanation there. The starting might be a little rocky but hey, I'm learning and I xam assure you it gets better. Well, nothing much to say here other than hope you enjoy the story.
author. The first ch itself contains multiple povs - first person, third person, which makes no sense. Honestly, it is tiring to read chapter 1 itself. Please try to change it 🙂
Quite the interesting story we've got here, can't wait to see how the MC's journey unfolds within the long-run in the world of MHA. It's a must read for sure.
Not much to go on of and while the starting is a bit iffy, the premise looks promising. Hope it gets better from now on. 5 stars on probation.
Not much of fresh idea in the MHA space but still one that catches ur attention. I'm honestly hoping the author does a decent job with this fic, no pressure tho
I can't wait to see how OP he's gonna be in the future.. I meant if he's got sand quirk, then I guess he'll be a logia type like croco-boy from one piece😮💯💥💥❤️🔥
Mandatory author review here. First of all, I have not the slightest clue what to do concerning most of the things in the story but that doesn't mean it'll be a casual wishfulfilment or a zero plot/sense story. Yuta's ability is a cross between Sandman from DC and Croco-boy from One Piece, so nothing explanation there. The starting might be a little rocky but hey, I'm learning and I xam assure you it gets better. Well, nothing much to say here other than hope you enjoy the story.
The grammar in this story is non existent