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Very good story. I hope for more chapters. End of complete review with points to meet the number of characters...................................
Really a good one from the start i recommend this for reading that in my opinion it's really a good👍
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good development, good translation, the translator do some effort with changing MC's name to japanese name so we can read it comfortably. approved🤌
good and interesting story, while it's slow pace at first now the pace was good, mc not so op for now and the jojo arc purpose was jus for quick all for one power but its not a bad thing. the only lacking in this fic is LEMON, where's the lemon author
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It could be good, but there is sooooo much booring school life, it's like 2 chapters of DBZ to 5 chapters of school life (friend want to find a girllfriend and mc goes to help). There is always the feeling that there is 2 plots, one good and one booring, and unfortunely there is waaaay more time dedicated to the booring one.
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Gostei muito, história interessante.Espero que continue a tradução ....................................... .................................
Beyond the fact that the novel is boring, what bothers me most is the typical shitty protagonist who likes to keep a low profile, webnovel is infested with these characters. Seriously, I don't understand why they find it funny.
It's not bad, just don't make the main world too chaotic. By mixing a lot of worlds in already multiverse fanfic will just do you a disservice. Don't choose worlds that are slice of life, you already have enough of them. Currently there's nothing interesting in the main world. In conclusion, the inclusion of harem in future chapters degraded your fanfic, no isekai for you.
Es una traducción bastante buena. Y la historia también, me recuerda a esas historias con Supergene a la hora de narrativa. Es decir, en la forma de desarrollar gramática mente el mundo. No en el contenido o la trama lento pero constante. Deberías de darle una oportunidad.
Its good with a slow start it says dragonball but the world he lives is a mix of different animes and his first dream world is dragonball i will give it a chance seems promising keep up the good work 👍🏻
Guys, this fiction has a slow start, and some folks might find it boring, but trust me, this is a literal masterpiece. The fiction has 700+ Chapters, it is a multiversal fic(MC going into different verses), and it is one of the highest-rated fics on Faloo ever. Faloo is a platform like Qidian(the Chinese equivalent of Webnovel). All works on Faloo are paid, and the top brass of writers get to post on Faloo, so stick with the story! You guys won’t be disappointed!
Much better than the other Dragon Ball fanfic! READREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREAD
Had to say some peak myself. From the screen 📱 to the ring 🥊 to the pen 🖊️ to the king 👑 Where's my crown 👑 that's my bling 💎 always drama when I ring 📞 See 👀 if I believe it in my heart ❤️ smash through the ceiling 🏠 cause I'm reaching for the stars ⭐
From the screen 📱 to the ring 🥊 to the pen 🖊️ to the king 👑 Where's my crown 👑 that's my bling 💎 always drama when I ring 📞 See 👀 if I believe it in my heart ❤️ smash through the ceiling 🏠 cause I'm reaching for the stars ⭐
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Very good story. I hope for more chapters. End of complete review with points to meet the number of characters...................................
Really a good one from the start i recommend this for reading that in my opinion it's really a good👍
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good development, good translation, the translator do some effort with changing MC's name to japanese name so we can read it comfortably. approved🤌
good and interesting story, while it's slow pace at first now the pace was good, mc not so op for now and the jojo arc purpose was jus for quick all for one power but its not a bad thing. the only lacking in this fic is LEMON, where's the lemon author
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It could be good, but there is sooooo much booring school life, it's like 2 chapters of DBZ to 5 chapters of school life (friend want to find a girllfriend and mc goes to help). There is always the feeling that there is 2 plots, one good and one booring, and unfortunely there is waaaay more time dedicated to the booring one.
GOTYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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Gostei muito, história interessante.Espero que continue a tradução ....................................... .................................
Beyond the fact that the novel is boring, what bothers me most is the typical shitty protagonist who likes to keep a low profile, webnovel is infested with these characters. Seriously, I don't understand why they find it funny.
It's not bad, just don't make the main world too chaotic. By mixing a lot of worlds in already multiverse fanfic will just do you a disservice. Don't choose worlds that are slice of life, you already have enough of them. Currently there's nothing interesting in the main world. In conclusion, the inclusion of harem in future chapters degraded your fanfic, no isekai for you.
Es una traducción bastante buena. Y la historia también, me recuerda a esas historias con Supergene a la hora de narrativa. Es decir, en la forma de desarrollar gramática mente el mundo. No en el contenido o la trama lento pero constante. Deberías de darle una oportunidad.
Its good with a slow start it says dragonball but the world he lives is a mix of different animes and his first dream world is dragonball i will give it a chance seems promising keep up the good work 👍🏻
Guys, this fiction has a slow start, and some folks might find it boring, but trust me, this is a literal masterpiece. The fiction has 700+ Chapters, it is a multiversal fic(MC going into different verses), and it is one of the highest-rated fics on Faloo ever. Faloo is a platform like Qidian(the Chinese equivalent of Webnovel). All works on Faloo are paid, and the top brass of writers get to post on Faloo, so stick with the story! You guys won’t be disappointed!
Much better than the other Dragon Ball fanfic! READREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREAD
Had to say some peak myself. From the screen 📱 to the ring 🥊 to the pen 🖊️ to the king 👑 Where's my crown 👑 that's my bling 💎 always drama when I ring 📞 See 👀 if I believe it in my heart ❤️ smash through the ceiling 🏠 cause I'm reaching for the stars ⭐
From the screen 📱 to the ring 🥊 to the pen 🖊️ to the king 👑 Where's my crown 👑 that's my bling 💎 always drama when I ring 📞 See 👀 if I believe it in my heart ❤️ smash through the ceiling 🏠 cause I'm reaching for the stars ⭐
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