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Read till chapter 10. On par with The Wind Calamity so far, which is honestly the highest praise that can be given to a Naruto fanfic in my opinion.
Personality of protagonist feels inhumane and unnatural. the story's flow is slightly off as the MC seems to be narating instead of thinking or observing. Apart from this, the story is good and has potential.
Great start. Unique perspective. Specially liked not using generic clan like senju Or uchiha. Please keep going at your own pace. ..............................................................
A nice Naruto FF. One of the best, in my Personal Top5! keep going! - read chapter 10/10-
This story Is really beautiful for now, i Hope all Naruto fans outta there to read It.
Off to a great start, I'm only at chapter 10 but I'm already hooked ! The main character is well written and we can already see some character developement here and there, the world is seen from his POV so no large info dump or stuff like this. I can only give a 4 because we haven't seen much but I would gladly come back and rate it a 5 when the story progresses. Keep up the good work author, you have a nice story here !
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[img=In a daze][img=Loving it][img=Out of it][img=Loving it][img=In a daze][img=Cries][img=Speechless][img=Mad][img=In a daze][img=Loving it]
Iβm really enjoying this story so far. Iβd give this all 5 stars, but I havenβt seen enough to know about how the story develops. But man! This is so good!
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Π₯ΠΎΡΠΎΡΠ°Ρ ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΠ°, ΠΆΠ΄ΡΠΌ ΠΏΡΠΎΠ΄ΠΎΠ»ΠΆΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅ππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌπππΌππππΌππΌππΌπππΌππππππΌππΌππΌ
Muito bom Ignore Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo
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Very good plot twist. It's very impressive, one of the best actually. Especially it's very rare to have mc to be in Yamanaka clan compared to Uchiha clan.
This book takes a unique approach with reincarnation and Naruto world. The protagonist is also interesting with his degree in medicine. Overall, itβs amazing, there isnβt much grammar errors, or inconsistent with pronouns. Itβs perfect, perfect.
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Going really well so far, I just read Chap 7, and I'm impressed.I really hope it's not dropped
J'aime les romans, mais ce roman, je ne sais pas comment le dire, est la perfection[img=In your face][img=coins][img=gift][img=Shocked][img=Mad]
coolπππππππππππππππππππππππ«’πππππβΊοΈππππππππ€ππππππππ
Read till chapter 10. On par with The Wind Calamity so far, which is honestly the highest praise that can be given to a Naruto fanfic in my opinion.
Personality of protagonist feels inhumane and unnatural. the story's flow is slightly off as the MC seems to be narating instead of thinking or observing. Apart from this, the story is good and has potential.
Great start. Unique perspective. Specially liked not using generic clan like senju Or uchiha. Please keep going at your own pace. ..............................................................
A nice Naruto FF. One of the best, in my Personal Top5! keep going! - read chapter 10/10-
This story Is really beautiful for now, i Hope all Naruto fans outta there to read It.
Off to a great start, I'm only at chapter 10 but I'm already hooked ! The main character is well written and we can already see some character developement here and there, the world is seen from his POV so no large info dump or stuff like this. I can only give a 4 because we haven't seen much but I would gladly come back and rate it a 5 when the story progresses. Keep up the good work author, you have a nice story here !
Muito muito bom !!!!°°°°°°°β’β’β’β’β’β’@@@@@@@@@!!!!!!!!!!!!@@@!@@@@@@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@@!@!@!@!!@!@!@!@!!!@!@@@!@@@@!!!!!!!@@@@@@@@@!!@@!@@@!!!@@@@@#@!@@@@@@@@!@@@@
love it more!!!................. love it more!!!................. love it more!!!................. love it more!!!................. love it more!!!.................
[img=In a daze][img=Loving it][img=Out of it][img=Loving it][img=In a daze][img=Cries][img=Speechless][img=Mad][img=In a daze][img=Loving it]
Iβm really enjoying this story so far. Iβd give this all 5 stars, but I havenβt seen enough to know about how the story develops. But man! This is so good!
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Π₯ΠΎΡΠΎΡΠ°Ρ ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΠ°, ΠΆΠ΄ΡΠΌ ΠΏΡΠΎΠ΄ΠΎΠ»ΠΆΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅ππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌπππΌππππΌππΌππΌπππΌππππππΌππΌππΌ
Muito bom Ignore Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo
Membuka SPOILER Very good plot twist. It's very impressive, one of the best actually. Especially it's very rare to have mc to be in Yamanaka clan compared to Uchiha clan.
This book takes a unique approach with reincarnation and Naruto world. The protagonist is also interesting with his degree in medicine. Overall, itβs amazing, there isnβt much grammar errors, or inconsistent with pronouns. Itβs perfect, perfect.
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Going really well so far, I just read Chap 7, and I'm impressed.I really hope it's not dropped
J'aime les romans, mais ce roman, je ne sais pas comment le dire, est la perfection[img=In your face][img=coins][img=gift][img=Shocked][img=Mad]