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It is pretty good. Absolutely recommended. Sanders has a nice personality and character smart not too overbearing not submissive, perfect balance. The other characters are of course good. It's a fanfiction. To sum it up, it has a good future.
one of the best fanfic about one piece so far in years i read fanfiction.....from character story and world lore so far as i know it (am just manga reader one piece and about anime not watch in years after summit marine war... don't mad at me please)
for power derived by system.. too powerful start for MC, beyond the canon real fruit counterparts. and MC can hybrid many if thise power.. what would the OP world be with this abomination?!..
meh... just meh. instead of going in a justified hunt against the celestial dragons he decides to go poaching for luffy's crew...
Over all good for a Chinese translated story but still had problems like many wuxia stories the mc's thinking process is questionable at times and just lacks logic but still good just need to turn off your brain in some parts of the story.
I like this story so far Keep good job Need more chapter👍 Ugpxitzoysoydydooydoydphcjpcjpcpjcpjchchcljcljcljcljlchlcohcohxhoxhcohxhochoxhochochoxhochchchoxhodyohxocohhochochlclhxohxohxhoxhoxhoxhox
Этот фанфик действительно заслуживает внимания. Сюжет развивается динамично и держит в напряжении. Автор умело прописывает характеры персонажей, особенно главного героя. Приятно читать историю с умным и адекватным протагонистом. Рекомендую к прочтению.
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It's a great One Piece fanfiction.. One of the best I think.. I love it 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. There still few chinese translation, but it's still okay.. I like how MC/Sanders want to revenge to Celestial Dragon for his father.. He even already kill 1.. I agree with Shiryuu, the Marines and WG made monster for enemy, they should let Sanders kill 1 Celestial Dragon (who kill his father) than caught him and make him want to kill all Celestial Dragon.. I think his power is too OP.. But can Awakening his DF he derive by eat the same DF is too broken (like Float-Float Fruit).. Can't wait to see who else will join his pirate crew.. Love your story author sama.. Keepup the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍
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Nice so far Need more chapter👍 Djshdhshsjsjshssjsjsjsjdhdjdjdjdjsjddjsjdjsjsjsjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjddjjdsjsjsjsjsjsjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjsjsjsjdjdjsjsjsmsmsmnsjdjdhshszhhzzhjzjsjsjsjsjzjszj
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Well, 29 chapters in I’ve been enjoying the story a lot well done solid four stars. I’m not good at bringing it down further I just know what I like and I’ve been enjoying the story. Keep up the fucking good work author ✍️
one of the best one piece fanfic i have read . continue the good work author don't drop it.
why do they write synopsis like that especially the robin one can't they just write mc went to another world and derived shit and became op
A very good one piece fanfic and a good job done on the translation. I hope the update speed could be increased.
its good fic, maybe one of my favorite one piece fanfic. I like mc personality not too evil and not naive either, I'm really tired to read needlessly evil mc or overly naive one.
nice one piece fan fiction ................................ ................................ ................................ ................................
Not bad fanfic, the translation is well-made and the updates are okay. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Interesting story. I'll follow it. Does anyone know the raw for this fanfic? <140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140>
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brilliantly written i am really hooked hope story reaches to many people 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟
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I was truly surprised by the premise of this story, after reading the available chapters I hope the story continues and is not abandoned by its author.
It is pretty good. Absolutely recommended. Sanders has a nice personality and character smart not too overbearing not submissive, perfect balance. The other characters are of course good. It's a fanfiction. To sum it up, it has a good future.
one of the best fanfic about one piece so far in years i read fanfiction.....from character story and world lore so far as i know it (am just manga reader one piece and about anime not watch in years after summit marine war... don't mad at me please)
for power derived by system.. too powerful start for MC, beyond the canon real fruit counterparts. and MC can hybrid many if thise power.. what would the OP world be with this abomination?!..
meh... just meh. instead of going in a justified hunt against the celestial dragons he decides to go poaching for luffy's crew...
Over all good for a Chinese translated story but still had problems like many wuxia stories the mc's thinking process is questionable at times and just lacks logic but still good just need to turn off your brain in some parts of the story.
I like this story so far Keep good job Need more chapter👍 Ugpxitzoysoydydooydoydphcjpcjpcpjcpjchchcljcljcljcljlchlcohcohxhoxhcohxhochoxhochochoxhochchchoxhodyohxocohhochochlclhxohxohxhoxhoxhoxhox
Этот фанфик действительно заслуживает внимания. Сюжет развивается динамично и держит в напряжении. Автор умело прописывает характеры персонажей, особенно главного героя. Приятно читать историю с умным и адекватным протагонистом. Рекомендую к прочтению.
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It's a great One Piece fanfiction.. One of the best I think.. I love it 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. There still few chinese translation, but it's still okay.. I like how MC/Sanders want to revenge to Celestial Dragon for his father.. He even already kill 1.. I agree with Shiryuu, the Marines and WG made monster for enemy, they should let Sanders kill 1 Celestial Dragon (who kill his father) than caught him and make him want to kill all Celestial Dragon.. I think his power is too OP.. But can Awakening his DF he derive by eat the same DF is too broken (like Float-Float Fruit).. Can't wait to see who else will join his pirate crew.. Love your story author sama.. Keepup the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍
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Well, 29 chapters in I’ve been enjoying the story a lot well done solid four stars. I’m not good at bringing it down further I just know what I like and I’ve been enjoying the story. Keep up the fucking good work author ✍️
one of the best one piece fanfic i have read . continue the good work author don't drop it.
why do they write synopsis like that especially the robin one can't they just write mc went to another world and derived shit and became op
A very good one piece fanfic and a good job done on the translation. I hope the update speed could be increased.
its good fic, maybe one of my favorite one piece fanfic. I like mc personality not too evil and not naive either, I'm really tired to read needlessly evil mc or overly naive one.
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Not bad fanfic, the translation is well-made and the updates are okay. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Interesting story. I'll follow it. Does anyone know the raw for this fanfic? <140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140>
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brilliantly written i am really hooked hope story reaches to many people 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟
Ну и правильно, зачем становиться пиратом или дозорным, лучше кошмарить этих отбросов, чтобы они даже спать без страха не проснуться не могли. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I was truly surprised by the premise of this story, after reading the available chapters I hope the story continues and is not abandoned by its author.