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I really like this novel, but my only issue with it is the cringe that comes with the characters yelling out their moves. Please tell me they don't do that anymore later on in the story
This is good stuff, the story and characters are interesting enough. The only gripe I have is the insane use of 'Yoda' tongue, which is pretty funny on occasion but it also butchers some sentences mis narration. While the characters definitely do not belong to cliche troupes, their behaviour could be more assertive which would have given reason to reveal the world building with more solid information.
This story is so gold ! Like gold gold, but can you please author use Ai(i think chatgpt ?) I know that righting is difficult but using your one style far better than AI [img=recommend]
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This novel literally made me binge and read more than 30 chapters in one sitting, I highly recommend this novel.
Love your story. The action is also nice i just don't like celestria that much, i'm leaning more to Sarah for the mc.
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I absolutely love the story 10 out of 10, I would highly recommend it. However, there's one thing I don't like, and that's Celestria. I find her weird, childish, and somewhat manipulative (manipulating the MC or acting pitiful in some degree.) At first, I thought the MC would distance himself from her because of what she did to her original childhood friend. I find it disgusting that she abandoned someone she had known for a long time for someone she just met and thought she loved. Then, when the MC arrived and proved himself, she started chasing him, which felt like a typical, overused trope in Chinese romance stories, common and boring in my opinion. Spoiler alert! Celestria even begged the MC to have a baby despite them being underage, which is a serious issue. On top of that, she lied to her family about being in a relationship with the MC when they weren't. That is very delulu of her and unhealthy to me. If the author decides to include Celestria in the harem (which I suspect the author will), I would strongly prefer Sarah as the main wife. She was there first, even before the MC transmigrated into this world, which makes it justifiable that she should hold that position. Sarah sacrificed so much just to be with the MC again, unlike Celestria. (This is just my opinion as a reader of this story. No hate especially to the author. I'm just expressing what I feel to the characters because I really like the story, and I hope that it could help the author in some degree.)
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I think I found a hidden gem. It's an excellent novel. Good character depth so far. I have to say the originality of the story is the best part. There are a few things I disagree with, such as him getting back together with the princess. I also see a lot of people complaining about him being too friendly with the protagonist. However, for me, that's part of the originality of the story and doesn't bother me at all. It's always good to have a cold personality paired with a chummy one. I'm currently caught up with the last chapter, 94. It seems like it's going to be around 1000 chapters, given the progression of this story, give or take.
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50 Chapters in, the novel is starting off very strong and I like the mature vibe much better than so many run of the mill reincarnation stories. When you have a regressor novel of a character 30+ going back to a high school academy, it is so infuriating when they act like a 16 year old again too. This novel HAS NONE OF THAT, and the MC AND the protagonist have mature relations and temperaments. The world building is slow but getting better, I wish the characters had more of a description that their hair color though, it is hard to visualize them sometimes. Looking forward to more chapters.
The plot is not bad. But the quality of the writing, the elaboration of the characters and the interactions between them do not allow to put more than 4.
Loving the story so far. Surprisingly good world building and depth of characters. Only issue is that the love interests randomly become infatuated with the mc, which I think is poorly written. Aside from that, it's a great story.
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The novel is just not for me Mc is too nice and chummy with the real protagonist ( he doesn’t have to antagonize him but I would’ve prefer if he ignored him ) Also i think endric is the new bff of the princess, and he has to have feelings from the past Alex but he shows no jealousy or anything(endric gf should also show jealousy, why she letting him get close to another girl)
i like the story but mc forgive celes so easily he had to keep her away at least because she don't believe in him when mc near his second execution I don't like her as heroine
I like it, in fact I have the author's other novel in my library but with such a bad rating I didn't even give it a chance, returning to the topic of this novel for now it is very good I hope it doesn't lose quality, the mc and the other characters have their own personality, we just have to hope that it stays the same or improves if it gets worse..., author, your little brother is going to fall.
Like the story so far. Got me hooked. Gonna stick around. The chapters feel a little short though. Hope the author post 2 chaps a day.
I loved the previous novel from the author and I'm liking this one even more.
Well, loving the story till this point and don't really have much complaints regarding the story itself I only gave character design 4 stars because I am getting sick of all the White haired mc I have read recently 😅 but I hope author keeps up the quality of the stiory.
Awesome start! I can’t wait to see how this story unfolds. Also I really hope this becomes a harem novel. The MC deserves a harem, one with a princess and a teacher at the least.
Love it, especially the fact that none of it felt artificial or forced. And we all can already guess who the FMC is.
God damn Mama Hood six chapters in and I can't wait to see what happens and also will you be updating daily or like just whenever
I haven't read this story yet but just from seeing who the author is and the synopsis I already know this is going to be good. Don't drop it.
You can ignore my stars, I just wanted to say that the beginning feels extremely similar to what I call “The Novel’s Extra” genre. To be clear I haven’t read anything more than the first, few chapters, so don’t look into my review too deeply. Just personal preference.
I really like this novel, but my only issue with it is the cringe that comes with the characters yelling out their moves. Please tell me they don't do that anymore later on in the story
This is good stuff, the story and characters are interesting enough. The only gripe I have is the insane use of 'Yoda' tongue, which is pretty funny on occasion but it also butchers some sentences mis narration. While the characters definitely do not belong to cliche troupes, their behaviour could be more assertive which would have given reason to reveal the world building with more solid information.
This story is so gold ! Like gold gold, but can you please author use Ai(i think chatgpt ?) I know that righting is difficult but using your one style far better than AI [img=recommend]
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This novel literally made me binge and read more than 30 chapters in one sitting, I highly recommend this novel.
Love your story. The action is also nice i just don't like celestria that much, i'm leaning more to Sarah for the mc.
Membuka SPOILER I absolutely love the story 10 out of 10, I would highly recommend it. However, there's one thing I don't like, and that's Celestria. I find her weird, childish, and somewhat manipulative (manipulating the MC or acting pitiful in some degree.) At first, I thought the MC would distance himself from her because of what she did to her original childhood friend. I find it disgusting that she abandoned someone she had known for a long time for someone she just met and thought she loved. Then, when the MC arrived and proved himself, she started chasing him, which felt like a typical, overused trope in Chinese romance stories, common and boring in my opinion. Spoiler alert! Celestria even begged the MC to have a baby despite them being underage, which is a serious issue. On top of that, she lied to her family about being in a relationship with the MC when they weren't. That is very delulu of her and unhealthy to me. If the author decides to include Celestria in the harem (which I suspect the author will), I would strongly prefer Sarah as the main wife. She was there first, even before the MC transmigrated into this world, which makes it justifiable that she should hold that position. Sarah sacrificed so much just to be with the MC again, unlike Celestria. (This is just my opinion as a reader of this story. No hate especially to the author. I'm just expressing what I feel to the characters because I really like the story, and I hope that it could help the author in some degree.)
Membuka SPOILER I think I found a hidden gem. It's an excellent novel. Good character depth so far. I have to say the originality of the story is the best part. There are a few things I disagree with, such as him getting back together with the princess. I also see a lot of people complaining about him being too friendly with the protagonist. However, for me, that's part of the originality of the story and doesn't bother me at all. It's always good to have a cold personality paired with a chummy one. I'm currently caught up with the last chapter, 94. It seems like it's going to be around 1000 chapters, given the progression of this story, give or take.
Membuka SPOILER 50 Chapters in, the novel is starting off very strong and I like the mature vibe much better than so many run of the mill reincarnation stories. When you have a regressor novel of a character 30+ going back to a high school academy, it is so infuriating when they act like a 16 year old again too. This novel HAS NONE OF THAT, and the MC AND the protagonist have mature relations and temperaments. The world building is slow but getting better, I wish the characters had more of a description that their hair color though, it is hard to visualize them sometimes. Looking forward to more chapters.
The plot is not bad. But the quality of the writing, the elaboration of the characters and the interactions between them do not allow to put more than 4.
Loving the story so far. Surprisingly good world building and depth of characters. Only issue is that the love interests randomly become infatuated with the mc, which I think is poorly written. Aside from that, it's a great story.
Membuka SPOILER The novel is just not for me Mc is too nice and chummy with the real protagonist ( he doesn’t have to antagonize him but I would’ve prefer if he ignored him ) Also i think endric is the new bff of the princess, and he has to have feelings from the past Alex but he shows no jealousy or anything(endric gf should also show jealousy, why she letting him get close to another girl)
i like the story but mc forgive celes so easily he had to keep her away at least because she don't believe in him when mc near his second execution I don't like her as heroine
I like it, in fact I have the author's other novel in my library but with such a bad rating I didn't even give it a chance, returning to the topic of this novel for now it is very good I hope it doesn't lose quality, the mc and the other characters have their own personality, we just have to hope that it stays the same or improves if it gets worse..., author, your little brother is going to fall.
Like the story so far. Got me hooked. Gonna stick around. The chapters feel a little short though. Hope the author post 2 chaps a day.
I loved the previous novel from the author and I'm liking this one even more.
Well, loving the story till this point and don't really have much complaints regarding the story itself I only gave character design 4 stars because I am getting sick of all the White haired mc I have read recently 😅 but I hope author keeps up the quality of the stiory.
Awesome start! I can’t wait to see how this story unfolds. Also I really hope this becomes a harem novel. The MC deserves a harem, one with a princess and a teacher at the least.
Love it, especially the fact that none of it felt artificial or forced. And we all can already guess who the FMC is.
God damn Mama Hood six chapters in and I can't wait to see what happens and also will you be updating daily or like just whenever
I haven't read this story yet but just from seeing who the author is and the synopsis I already know this is going to be good. Don't drop it.
You can ignore my stars, I just wanted to say that the beginning feels extremely similar to what I call “The Novel’s Extra” genre. To be clear I haven’t read anything more than the first, few chapters, so don’t look into my review too deeply. Just personal preference.