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Alassian

Funny story, with decent enough translation only issue being that the gender is usually swapped. Other than that no issues Though author are you planning on releasing the r-18 stuff on patreon exclusively? If yes while that's fair we should probably remove the r-18 tag in that case. Cheers!

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Freshline

Good story so far πŸ‘ Keep up the good work πŸ’ͺ

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Anubis_9876

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3mth
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A_FellowDegenerate

Good Story although the MC is a bit weak at the beginning he is getting stronger recently so not instant OP MC but not weak as a twig like other stories. Good pace not too fast but not slow either and isn’t boring. Just some grammar errors that are easy to correct.

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Glebby_Boi

This is probably the best depiction of how a β€˜somewhat’ normal guy would act and react in a shiddy cliche urban world plot type of novel. And honestly, I’m loving it! I get a dose of normality mixed with the expected brain rot. The translation is great, so thank you for your hard workπŸ™ŒπŸ»

4mth
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Davi_Mello

The translation is great, but it has the recurring error of switching the gender of the people, from his to hers, etc.

4mth
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DetectiveHarem

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4mth
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daoist_764

The quality is fine but you keep misgendering people

4mth
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Alassian

Funny story, with decent enough translation only issue being that the gender is usually swapped. Other than that no issues Though author are you planning on releasing the r-18 stuff on patreon exclusively? If yes while that's fair we should probably remove the r-18 tag in that case. Cheers!

28d
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Freshline

Good story so far πŸ‘ Keep up the good work πŸ’ͺ

3mth
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Anubis_9876

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3mth
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A_FellowDegenerate

Good Story although the MC is a bit weak at the beginning he is getting stronger recently so not instant OP MC but not weak as a twig like other stories. Good pace not too fast but not slow either and isn’t boring. Just some grammar errors that are easy to correct.

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3mth
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Glebby_Boi

This is probably the best depiction of how a β€˜somewhat’ normal guy would act and react in a shiddy cliche urban world plot type of novel. And honestly, I’m loving it! I get a dose of normality mixed with the expected brain rot. The translation is great, so thank you for your hard workπŸ™ŒπŸ»

4mth
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Davi_Mello

The translation is great, but it has the recurring error of switching the gender of the people, from his to hers, etc.

4mth
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DetectiveHarem

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4mth
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daoist_764

The quality is fine but you keep misgendering people

4mth
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