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It would be better if you warn us at the start it gonna be cuck in your book to safe all of us time waste
What's up with these cucks infesting webnovel 😮💨 Go out and be a man dude sub human garbage
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I dropped because mc shifted his personality in one chapter then when I came back I learned he's now cuck?! author please....
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Helping out . Wondering where will it go. Its certainly hot. Onward coomer brother, you can do it. ########################################################
Honestly it turn trash real quick mc got scared of losing magic so he turn into a whimp/cuck who enjoy others using his girl yea not my cup of tea anyway this has ntr coming from a mile and we can see it so I’m gone with a good amount of other readers
At first, it was a very good story but now it is beyond stupid that the author wants to destroy his story. I am very disappointed author give your story to someone that doesn't have your weird and stupid shit for brains.
The beginning was good but the author decided to make the MC a disgusting guy who doesn't mind sharing his girls with other men.[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
mc was okay at the start, but as time went on, he got wierder and wierder, his personality shifted completely at one point.
Nop nul le MC est chelou et en plus bipolaire [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
I thought this was gonna be an interesting read. But first chapter in, mc gets on with petunia. Really? Petunia? The molly? It would be understandable if they were at least a bit attractive. I think i lost my breakfast
basura escrita por Chatgpt o una IA ... además de "escribir" +18 con un niño de 11 años... 🤢🤮 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
how old are the first years? AU world so different age when starting hogwarts? dfdfsdfdfdfdfdfdfszdgff gf gfg f gfg f gf gfg f g
hey author I have not seen any Harry Potter series then can It still readable ????
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Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!Great story!!
It would be better if you warn us at the start it gonna be cuck in your book to safe all of us time waste
What's up with these cucks infesting webnovel 😮💨 Go out and be a man dude sub human garbage
-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1
I dropped because mc shifted his personality in one chapter then when I came back I learned he's now cuck?! author please....
Cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck.cuck
Helping out . Wondering where will it go. Its certainly hot. Onward coomer brother, you can do it. ########################################################
Honestly it turn trash real quick mc got scared of losing magic so he turn into a whimp/cuck who enjoy others using his girl yea not my cup of tea anyway this has ntr coming from a mile and we can see it so I’m gone with a good amount of other readers
At first, it was a very good story but now it is beyond stupid that the author wants to destroy his story. I am very disappointed author give your story to someone that doesn't have your weird and stupid shit for brains.
The beginning was good but the author decided to make the MC a disgusting guy who doesn't mind sharing his girls with other men.[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
mc was okay at the start, but as time went on, he got wierder and wierder, his personality shifted completely at one point.
Nop nul le MC est chelou et en plus bipolaire [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
I thought this was gonna be an interesting read. But first chapter in, mc gets on with petunia. Really? Petunia? The molly? It would be understandable if they were at least a bit attractive. I think i lost my breakfast
basura escrita por Chatgpt o una IA ... además de "escribir" +18 con un niño de 11 años... 🤢🤮 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
how old are the first years? AU world so different age when starting hogwarts? dfdfsdfdfdfdfdfdfszdgff gf gfg f gfg f gf gfg f g
hey author I have not seen any Harry Potter series then can It still readable ????
Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??Hay yuri??
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