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Another good translation, but bland MC, little system usage, and the MC gives control of his body to dead people.
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! ππ It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. There a few times an unconsisten about character name (not MC name), but it's still okay.. I think MC/Hara is too OverPowered (OP).. He can deduce/learn something easily, that's too broken.. But I like that he's not afraid to show his power, he also change many thinks (Nawaki not death, I think Orochimaru will not defected in this story, he became a Hokage will bring many different thing for Konoha).. I'm so satisfied when I read Danzo fate and how he solve Danzo.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job ππππ
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The MC is your typical arrogant OP protagonist. The only feeling he really has is arrogance as far as I can tell. Super flat cardboard character. In contrast the Canon characters feel much more real.
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
Muy buena la historia, acostumbro a dejar que se acumulen los capΓtulos, pero con esta no, es un pesar que solo sea 1 capΓtulo por dΓa... 10/10
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Membuka SPOILERi am writing this comment after reading chapter 55. I don't know about others but for me this is one of the few Naruto fanfic that gave me the same thrilling excitement of madaras battles in 4th ninja war . keep it up author.
Chapter 75 at the time of this review. This novel is very well written and edited, the system is very interesting, the interactions are realistic and not forced and it is a very smooth and constant read, unlike the highs and low peaks of interest that we generally find throughout novels. I highly recommend that anyone who reads this review and is undecided about reading it go ahead and enjoy this work. Thank you for the author/translator work.
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Membuka SPOILERJust finished the latest chapter (54), and I gotta say, itβs one of the best Iβve read in a while. The story and the writing just feels right.
Good start π MC's looks π but MC's personality kinda bland.... Please don't keep Danzou alive for to long, Most author like to keep Danzou for to long in story
juste une reviexw de soutien a l'auteur ................................................ ................................................ ................................................ ................................................ ................................................
this is a review as of chapter 14. the translation quality is quite good. the mc has already become OP for his age but as its chinese novel which usually go for hundreds of chapters, lets see how it goes. Give it a try
Really good fanfic keep up the good work and thx[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
more...morE....moRE....mORE....MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! ..................................................................................................
Shamelless Review count+1 I did this project as it is one of the best naruto fanfics I read, with a smart mc, a good pace, and has kingdom building elements in it. I recommend you guys to try it.
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Another good translation, but bland MC, little system usage, and the MC gives control of his body to dead people.
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! ππ It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. There a few times an unconsisten about character name (not MC name), but it's still okay.. I think MC/Hara is too OverPowered (OP).. He can deduce/learn something easily, that's too broken.. But I like that he's not afraid to show his power, he also change many thinks (Nawaki not death, I think Orochimaru will not defected in this story, he became a Hokage will bring many different thing for Konoha).. I'm so satisfied when I read Danzo fate and how he solve Danzo.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job ππππ
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The MC is your typical arrogant OP protagonist. The only feeling he really has is arrogance as far as I can tell. Super flat cardboard character. In contrast the Canon characters feel much more real.
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
Muy buena la historia, acostumbro a dejar que se acumulen los capΓtulos, pero con esta no, es un pesar que solo sea 1 capΓtulo por dΓa... 10/10
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Membuka SPOILERi am writing this comment after reading chapter 55. I don't know about others but for me this is one of the few Naruto fanfic that gave me the same thrilling excitement of madaras battles in 4th ninja war . keep it up author.
Chapter 75 at the time of this review. This novel is very well written and edited, the system is very interesting, the interactions are realistic and not forced and it is a very smooth and constant read, unlike the highs and low peaks of interest that we generally find throughout novels. I highly recommend that anyone who reads this review and is undecided about reading it go ahead and enjoy this work. Thank you for the author/translator work.
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Membuka SPOILERJust finished the latest chapter (54), and I gotta say, itβs one of the best Iβve read in a while. The story and the writing just feels right.
Good start π MC's looks π but MC's personality kinda bland.... Please don't keep Danzou alive for to long, Most author like to keep Danzou for to long in story
juste une reviexw de soutien a l'auteur ................................................ ................................................ ................................................ ................................................ ................................................
this is a review as of chapter 14. the translation quality is quite good. the mc has already become OP for his age but as its chinese novel which usually go for hundreds of chapters, lets see how it goes. Give it a try
Really good fanfic keep up the good work and thx[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
more...morE....moRE....mORE....MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! ..................................................................................................
Shamelless Review count+1 I did this project as it is one of the best naruto fanfics I read, with a smart mc, a good pace, and has kingdom building elements in it. I recommend you guys to try it.