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This story is like a real movie or drama and interaction btw characters are smooth.. so yeah best slow romance + character building + word building this is op 😁
love all the characters in this novel, Sui and Erina's relationship feels incredibly natural. It's been a joy to watch it unfold. This story is 100% worth the read. Homie also uploads like crazy on a consistent basis!
Well, mostly cookie cutter story, nothing groundbreaking but solid, was enjoyable and would be at least star better over all if not for MC, it was fun read to pass time in bus. He starts dipping into different girls. I know that happens "in real life" but he was acting mostly strait and ignoring other girls (or at least for a long time I was under impression that there will be only Erina), so his decisions put me off). Anyway seems like I set up myself for light story with funny undertones and got twist I did not expect and this is probably my main grievance as I was felt blindsided. There was no established reasons to go after other girls so it went down with quality. MC maybe was low key arrogant (and not teasing most of the time), but he did not feel full "chinaman" so it was okay, maybe will get back to story after I take a break because last few chapters made me...
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Overall a really good story with a fantastic update schedule, character design and development.
Es agradable leer este fanfiction de una manera relajada, con una estructura de mundos que solo se centra más en el principal y los demas como apoyo para desarrollar mejor esta historia 👍👍👍😁😁😁
It starts slowly but gets much better later on. Give it a try, at least until he enters Totsuki. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
This review was made after the creator had read all the chapters up to the date of this review, where we can evaluate the main positive and negative points of this book. Positives: Despite being Chinese, this translation is excellent, showing the protagonist interacting in a world of mixed animes; the romance shown was very well done, showing the construction of relationships step by step. Negatives: Is this fic a Harem or just a Romance? That's my doubt so far. Also the rhythm is confusing, as there is no way to know when Sui goes through each bathroom.
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Its a good slice of life fanfic. Hopefully author won’t drop but I enjoy this fic a lot. Especially since its main focus is Shokugeki. Keep up the good work and thank you!
La historia me gusta bastante y eso que uso el traductor de la aplicacion para leerlo en español, siempre estando pendiente cuando saca nuevos capitulos y ojala y si termine en harem aunque se que a muchos no les gusta
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I like reading it, It's a good recommendation towards people who likes Multiple anime verses in 1 settings while not too overlapping each other.
the stroy is great and a self insert being in food wars is a story rhat I always wanted to read. I have no issue with the harem. but the things that is annoying js how he is confirmed to be in a relationship with erina and everyone else knows yet they are fine cheating and sui doesn't seem to mind. it's a piss take how this harem aspect is coming into play.
Entiendo que tenga que ver con la comida pero olvidó totalmente la puerta a otro mundo y se sobre centra en el mundo de shingeki joder hay el mundo de torino, one piece y otros pero se olvida totalmente y joder y los otros personajes de su mundo original quedan redegalados
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
For the early chapters, it's very good, it's like a casual novel that makes you addicted, but from chapter 100 onwards, the story development starts to get strange, and the author seems to be in a hurry for a harem.
Very good, fun to read and emotional, but please translate it into Thai so that it sounds like common people's language.[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Feeling it][img=Good night][img=In a daze][img=In your face]
Of course, it’s a 5-star rating from me! Now, let me give you a taste of what to expect from this book. First off, it’s a slice-of-life fanfic—no scheming, no killing, and no face-slapping enemies here. It’s all about cooking. From the sexy cover, you might have guessed that the story is set in the world of ‘Shokugeki no Soma’ (Food Wars). As you read, not only will you enjoy the story, but you’ll also find yourself getting hungry, so keep some water nearby to curb that craving!
This story is like a real movie or drama and interaction btw characters are smooth.. so yeah best slow romance + character building + word building this is op 😁
love all the characters in this novel, Sui and Erina's relationship feels incredibly natural. It's been a joy to watch it unfold. This story is 100% worth the read. Homie also uploads like crazy on a consistent basis!
Well, mostly cookie cutter story, nothing groundbreaking but solid, was enjoyable and would be at least star better over all if not for MC, it was fun read to pass time in bus. He starts dipping into different girls. I know that happens "in real life" but he was acting mostly strait and ignoring other girls (or at least for a long time I was under impression that there will be only Erina), so his decisions put me off). Anyway seems like I set up myself for light story with funny undertones and got twist I did not expect and this is probably my main grievance as I was felt blindsided. There was no established reasons to go after other girls so it went down with quality. MC maybe was low key arrogant (and not teasing most of the time), but he did not feel full "chinaman" so it was okay, maybe will get back to story after I take a break because last few chapters made me...
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Overall a really good story with a fantastic update schedule, character design and development.
Es agradable leer este fanfiction de una manera relajada, con una estructura de mundos que solo se centra más en el principal y los demas como apoyo para desarrollar mejor esta historia 👍👍👍😁😁😁
It starts slowly but gets much better later on. Give it a try, at least until he enters Totsuki. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
This review was made after the creator had read all the chapters up to the date of this review, where we can evaluate the main positive and negative points of this book. Positives: Despite being Chinese, this translation is excellent, showing the protagonist interacting in a world of mixed animes; the romance shown was very well done, showing the construction of relationships step by step. Negatives: Is this fic a Harem or just a Romance? That's my doubt so far. Also the rhythm is confusing, as there is no way to know when Sui goes through each bathroom.
Membuka SPOILER Its a good slice of life fanfic. Hopefully author won’t drop but I enjoy this fic a lot. Especially since its main focus is Shokugeki. Keep up the good work and thank you!
La historia me gusta bastante y eso que uso el traductor de la aplicacion para leerlo en español, siempre estando pendiente cuando saca nuevos capitulos y ojala y si termine en harem aunque se que a muchos no les gusta
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I like reading it, It's a good recommendation towards people who likes Multiple anime verses in 1 settings while not too overlapping each other.
the stroy is great and a self insert being in food wars is a story rhat I always wanted to read. I have no issue with the harem. but the things that is annoying js how he is confirmed to be in a relationship with erina and everyone else knows yet they are fine cheating and sui doesn't seem to mind. it's a piss take how this harem aspect is coming into play.
Entiendo que tenga que ver con la comida pero olvidó totalmente la puerta a otro mundo y se sobre centra en el mundo de shingeki joder hay el mundo de torino, one piece y otros pero se olvida totalmente y joder y los otros personajes de su mundo original quedan redegalados
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
For the early chapters, it's very good, it's like a casual novel that makes you addicted, but from chapter 100 onwards, the story development starts to get strange, and the author seems to be in a hurry for a harem.
Very good, fun to read and emotional, but please translate it into Thai so that it sounds like common people's language.[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Feeling it][img=Good night][img=In a daze][img=In your face]
Of course, it’s a 5-star rating from me! Now, let me give you a taste of what to expect from this book. First off, it’s a slice-of-life fanfic—no scheming, no killing, and no face-slapping enemies here. It’s all about cooking. From the sexy cover, you might have guessed that the story is set in the world of ‘Shokugeki no Soma’ (Food Wars). As you read, not only will you enjoy the story, but you’ll also find yourself getting hungry, so keep some water nearby to curb that craving!