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great story, at the start it might be a bit confusing with the powers and how they are used, if you can make it pass that small part you find a diamond.
I would rather eat my own shit than read waifu catalog cancer. I don't really have anything else to say but I've gotta use 140 characters so.........................................................
really loving this story so far, can't wait to see how it progresses. Can't wait to see the other worlds. Will definitely continue reading it. Please don't drop.
16 chapters in I already believed that this story was going to be good when I saw the disclaimer "English is not my first language" but it surpassed my expectations
I really love Harry Potter fics, but this one have something special. The more i read , the more i want to read . That’s a really good work.
frustrating read, mc is like a soap opera heroine. I can tolerate edgy, emo characters but this shit was something else. the interaction between mc and Potter gang drove me mad.
it's a really well written story, with an interesting power set. I'm really interested in seeing how it'll go further down the line, can't wait to see what the author is cooking up. please don't drop it's a really interesting story
It’s a good, wry good idea of a story. There’s a huge plot hole in the first chapter to the 3rd chapter. She wakes up and doesn’t understand why she’s in a new body(female snap) only to contradict that by saying she planned it all out with the ‘company’. She then goes for a 4th magic system when she already has 3 to use. She has Roy mustang’s template, also another persons who I don’t know(somthing to do with metals), and Harry Potter magic(snaps template) she then goes for a magic girl magic system. She also planes to steal from the ‘company’ by getting a new character template each week and putting all the memories in a metal(metal magic thing) this is such a broken thing that it would probably ruin the story but thankfull the ‘company’ read her mind and said no and there would be consequences if she does this, and so they compensate her with the full power of the magic girl magic system right off the bat. This just completely ruins that aspect as well, why go for another magic system in the first place then. I also asked if the aurther could explain this ‘company’ so we can understand what it can or can’t do. I would also suggest to breaking the really long paragraph up, it takes up my full screen and I have to scroll a bit to get to the end of the paragraph. Other than that, it is aurthers first book so its pretty good.
i mean its good, but i am still unsure at the moment. the 4.2 rating is for the good impression it made on me, but this can change depending how the story matures.
really loving this story can't wait to see how she effects the hp world and other worlds also hope the author like so many others doesn't drop of the face of the earth never to be heard from again
Great Premise! I will continue to read more................................................................................................................
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great story, at the start it might be a bit confusing with the powers and how they are used, if you can make it pass that small part you find a diamond.
I would rather eat my own shit than read waifu catalog cancer. I don't really have anything else to say but I've gotta use 140 characters so.........................................................
really loving this story so far, can't wait to see how it progresses. Can't wait to see the other worlds. Will definitely continue reading it. Please don't drop.
16 chapters in I already believed that this story was going to be good when I saw the disclaimer "English is not my first language" but it surpassed my expectations
I really love Harry Potter fics, but this one have something special. The more i read , the more i want to read . That’s a really good work.
frustrating read, mc is like a soap opera heroine. I can tolerate edgy, emo characters but this shit was something else. the interaction between mc and Potter gang drove me mad.
it's a really well written story, with an interesting power set. I'm really interested in seeing how it'll go further down the line, can't wait to see what the author is cooking up. please don't drop it's a really interesting story
It’s a good, wry good idea of a story. There’s a huge plot hole in the first chapter to the 3rd chapter. She wakes up and doesn’t understand why she’s in a new body(female snap) only to contradict that by saying she planned it all out with the ‘company’. She then goes for a 4th magic system when she already has 3 to use. She has Roy mustang’s template, also another persons who I don’t know(somthing to do with metals), and Harry Potter magic(snaps template) she then goes for a magic girl magic system. She also planes to steal from the ‘company’ by getting a new character template each week and putting all the memories in a metal(metal magic thing) this is such a broken thing that it would probably ruin the story but thankfull the ‘company’ read her mind and said no and there would be consequences if she does this, and so they compensate her with the full power of the magic girl magic system right off the bat. This just completely ruins that aspect as well, why go for another magic system in the first place then. I also asked if the aurther could explain this ‘company’ so we can understand what it can or can’t do. I would also suggest to breaking the really long paragraph up, it takes up my full screen and I have to scroll a bit to get to the end of the paragraph. Other than that, it is aurthers first book so its pretty good.
i mean its good, but i am still unsure at the moment. the 4.2 rating is for the good impression it made on me, but this can change depending how the story matures.
really loving this story can't wait to see how she effects the hp world and other worlds also hope the author like so many others doesn't drop of the face of the earth never to be heard from again
Great Premise! I will continue to read more................................................................................................................
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Slow, no progression, mc gets bullied all the time by dumbledor