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awesome 👌 its agood beginning i wish you could continue this way of mc building and world building and what i really loved about the book that is no harem no female lead no romance (i hate it caze how a villain can love he is a villain, "no emotions, no feeling , cold heart") and i asored MC's selfishness go ahead 💪🔥 your book will be great 👌💀
I'm looking forward to the adventure, okay? --------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------
Writing Quality: Not a native English speaker, so take my opinion on writing with a grain of salt, I didn't notice any grammar errors or any problems with sentence structure, but the author has a problem with repetitive description of the main character's thoughts and facial expression multiple times in the same chapter. Story development: In the first 43 chapters, the story progressed quite a lot, it explained how the system works, the talent of the mc and others and how they work, what related skills they gain from leveling and more. Character design: In 43 chapters, we got to know the main character (Nyx) and three of his followers (Viktor, Lucas, Ryan) characters on the surface level, they're only given one or two unique characteristics without going too deep into their character this needs to be addressed in the future but for now it's good enough (but please stop the pickering between Viktor and Lucas because this isn't funny if this was you trying to add comedy into the story it isn't working) Updating stability: From what I saw, it's 5 chapters weakly (I may be wrong, tho), so it works enough for me. World Background: Post apocalyptic earth with system and tower nothing too crazy or unique, but it's good regardless. I have two points I want clarification on, so I hope the author answers me 1- Will this story contain Harem or romance (for the mc)? If so, please tell me because I truly don't enjoy it, especially in novels with an mc like this (simply doesn't make sense). 2- Will this involve elements of army or kingdom building in the future? because he's already created a nameless organisation, so I think it's possible (which is something I enjoy)
awesome 👌 its agood beginning i wish you could continue this way of mc building and world building and what i really loved about the book that is no harem no female lead no romance (i hate it caze how a villain can love he is a villain, "no emotions, no feeling , cold heart") and i asored MC's selfishness go ahead 💪🔥 your book will be great 👌💀
I'm looking forward to the adventure, okay? --------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------
Writing Quality: Not a native English speaker, so take my opinion on writing with a grain of salt, I didn't notice any grammar errors or any problems with sentence structure, but the author has a problem with repetitive description of the main character's thoughts and facial expression multiple times in the same chapter. Story development: In the first 43 chapters, the story progressed quite a lot, it explained how the system works, the talent of the mc and others and how they work, what related skills they gain from leveling and more. Character design: In 43 chapters, we got to know the main character (Nyx) and three of his followers (Viktor, Lucas, Ryan) characters on the surface level, they're only given one or two unique characteristics without going too deep into their character this needs to be addressed in the future but for now it's good enough (but please stop the pickering between Viktor and Lucas because this isn't funny if this was you trying to add comedy into the story it isn't working) Updating stability: From what I saw, it's 5 chapters weakly (I may be wrong, tho), so it works enough for me. World Background: Post apocalyptic earth with system and tower nothing too crazy or unique, but it's good regardless. I have two points I want clarification on, so I hope the author answers me 1- Will this story contain Harem or romance (for the mc)? If so, please tell me because I truly don't enjoy it, especially in novels with an mc like this (simply doesn't make sense). 2- Will this involve elements of army or kingdom building in the future? because he's already created a nameless organisation, so I think it's possible (which is something I enjoy)