Reviews of Danmachi: I Have A Type-Moon Gacha System! by heavenlydawn_ - Webnovel

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heavenlydawn_

I know this time .........I'd win!........

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Aster_ainosDaoist

A very good fanfic well constructed with interesting characters and an encouraging beginning a relatively well explained and detailed world as well as for the interactions between the characters. Frequent updates and weekly content provided and maintained. I wish more visibility for this fanfic which has potential as well as more reviews to increase its visibility. If I have to make a criticism it is chapters a little short which do not always introduce clearly and with context but this can be introduced later if it is a voluntary fact of the author example Arcueid Brunestud

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Kshitiz_Kumar_4423

I am pretty certain I read a Chinese novel almost identical to this one with around 900+ chapters. is this a translation of that one ?

7d
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ThatEpicTragedy

I'm genuinely confused by some of these reviews. I'm not convinced we read the same book. The book is well written, few errors, the system exists but, at least so far, isn't overly used. My main concerns with this novel are the length of the chapters, they're god awful short and a lot of them could be cut out and you'd miss nothing of importance, and the hesitance of the MC. The dude has an unbreakable weapon that levels with him, got a massive boost to his body and mind from item pulls (which didn't affect his stats? I'm guessing hidden because system even though both hestia and hephistus could tell something changed?) He won't even go passed the first floor, he's supposed to be bell but with more resources, smarter, and knowledge, yet the dude stays on the first floor because he doesn't want attention drawn to him. no one cares about a level 1 adventurer, and no one is paying attention to you on the top floors of the dungeon, why is it when he hears there's a bunch of monsters spawning below the first floor he ignores it? He can't in one chapter say he wants to get stronger and beat the one eyed black dragon, but in the next be like, "well I can only spend 15 minutes in the dungeon because people will know." WHO?!? there's no one up there, and the ones that are don't care about you. Anyway, this story is makes slow burns look smoking fast.

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vonAshborn

El início me recoerda de otra história su nombre es < Soy el protagonista de Danmachi >Pero creo que hay pequenos câmbios. Es que lei lá história ase como 2 anos.

1mth
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Xmpr30

Its pretty mid because: - MC is unnecessarily paranoid. Like guy wears a cloak everywhere as according to him everyone is out to kill him. Wearing a cloak would get more attention. - I read to Ch 21, but there's no romantic action yet not even a hint from the MC. That said it's pretty decent if you don't mind the things above, and has good weak-strong element to it.

2mth
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Sil3nt_1

I am on chapter 41 and am really enjoying the story. the only bad thing about it is that the updates are very few and inconsistent.

3mth
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Tony_Jones_5420

Like the writing and idea of the moon system. Only real problem is the standard mic that doesn’t care about others. Almost feels like mic is playing a video game and is not living in the world.

3mth
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DaoistLLOVLK

Autor hay algunos personajes que recuerdan algo que de una línea de tiempo pasada? Y si es así hay más de dos o puede ser otra cosa? Y ya por curiosidad Lili también sabe algo?

3mth
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DaoistLLOVLK

Excelente historia y no deja de sorprenderme y no suena forzado y tampoco aburre, muy buena trama y desarrollo de los acontecimientos y personajes también muy buen desarrollo se acercan y interactuan de forma pasiva

3mth
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DaoistLLOVLK

Excelente hermano 👌, este no deja de sorprenderme es fluido y no forzado, muy buena narrativa y desarrollo de personajes, solo quedaría ver las reacciones de los demás personajes principales, pues pienso que si Riveria y Aiz recuerdan algo que paso? Me preguntó los demás miembros de la familia Hestia recuerdan algo?

3mth
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DaoistLLOVLK

Hasta el momento no deja de sorprenderme la historia pero me preguntó cuál será el comportamiento de Freya será una celosa qué hará lo qué quiera o verá a Bell como a un igual al que tendrá respetar? O simplemente no se rendirá para conquistar su corazón?

3mth
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Arturwho

I love it is really nice story I like the system of fate and is a really nice story

3mth
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Voids_TrueOverlord

this book is the best one after many fanfic i read about danmaci that so-so but This one is the best as far i know.....keep up author

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4mth
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InmortalE

The story is good, I will not deny it, however it has two big flaws, one is that the author complicated the story too much and two is that he exaggerated things greatly. Other than that, it's a good read.

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seventh_child

Não me lembro do original, mas eu acho que você melhorou muito a história... Embora eu não tenha tanta certeza, já que faz muito tempo que eu li essa história, além de ter sido MTL.

4mth
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Grim_Yukki

Goated story which this could earn another chapter…

4mth
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CielTmpst

.....................................................mmm

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4mth
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Esdeaths_Slave

Very good and well written story. No mtl which is good and little to no grammar mistakes. 5/5

4mth
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Tokinada_dao_hood

Jo Jo Jo Jo jo jo jo. Jo mama

4mth
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Wruthor

This Fqnfic literally met all of my expectations!! So, More Chapters!!! RAAAHHHHH!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Membuka SPOILER
4mth
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Tokinada_dao_hood

Master piece. There is no thing here stop watching.

4mth
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Marcus_Hembree

I am enjoying the work, something's too keep in mind, don't let him be able to summon servants until just shortly before the war against Apollo and after Lili joins the Hestia Familia for good. Make Summon Servant a skill he aquires. The command seals be usage limit be based on his adventure level. Also keep the joke about Bell being being compared to the rabbit monster Almiraj.

4mth
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Molly_DV

little bit of mess and slightly annoying but this fic still 40 chapter so im still curious where's the author take us from here

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Tokinada_dao_hood

Master piece its so cool and the fact that it well be a multiverse to is better

4mth
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Psan
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Worth it, but im worried about mc being so overpowered so fast, he will have no chance to meet girls like Tiona and Lily before he is way to powerful.

4mth
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IndecisiveKing

I was promised free cookies that’s why I’m here so you can continue on?………..

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Shibou_Kurai

Really interesting story... I like it [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

4mth
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Accott

Ta weno el fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4mth
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heavenlydawn_

I know this time .........I'd win!........

5mth
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5mth
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Aster_ainosDaoist

A very good fanfic well constructed with interesting characters and an encouraging beginning a relatively well explained and detailed world as well as for the interactions between the characters. Frequent updates and weekly content provided and maintained. I wish more visibility for this fanfic which has potential as well as more reviews to increase its visibility. If I have to make a criticism it is chapters a little short which do not always introduce clearly and with context but this can be introduced later if it is a voluntary fact of the author example Arcueid Brunestud

4mth
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Kshitiz_Kumar_4423

I am pretty certain I read a Chinese novel almost identical to this one with around 900+ chapters. is this a translation of that one ?

7d
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ThatEpicTragedy

I'm genuinely confused by some of these reviews. I'm not convinced we read the same book. The book is well written, few errors, the system exists but, at least so far, isn't overly used. My main concerns with this novel are the length of the chapters, they're god awful short and a lot of them could be cut out and you'd miss nothing of importance, and the hesitance of the MC. The dude has an unbreakable weapon that levels with him, got a massive boost to his body and mind from item pulls (which didn't affect his stats? I'm guessing hidden because system even though both hestia and hephistus could tell something changed?) He won't even go passed the first floor, he's supposed to be bell but with more resources, smarter, and knowledge, yet the dude stays on the first floor because he doesn't want attention drawn to him. no one cares about a level 1 adventurer, and no one is paying attention to you on the top floors of the dungeon, why is it when he hears there's a bunch of monsters spawning below the first floor he ignores it? He can't in one chapter say he wants to get stronger and beat the one eyed black dragon, but in the next be like, "well I can only spend 15 minutes in the dungeon because people will know." WHO?!? there's no one up there, and the ones that are don't care about you. Anyway, this story is makes slow burns look smoking fast.

10d
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vonAshborn

El início me recoerda de otra história su nombre es < Soy el protagonista de Danmachi >Pero creo que hay pequenos câmbios. Es que lei lá história ase como 2 anos.

1mth
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Xmpr30

Its pretty mid because: - MC is unnecessarily paranoid. Like guy wears a cloak everywhere as according to him everyone is out to kill him. Wearing a cloak would get more attention. - I read to Ch 21, but there's no romantic action yet not even a hint from the MC. That said it's pretty decent if you don't mind the things above, and has good weak-strong element to it.

2mth
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Sil3nt_1

I am on chapter 41 and am really enjoying the story. the only bad thing about it is that the updates are very few and inconsistent.

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Tony_Jones_5420

Like the writing and idea of the moon system. Only real problem is the standard mic that doesn’t care about others. Almost feels like mic is playing a video game and is not living in the world.

3mth
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DaoistLLOVLK

Autor hay algunos personajes que recuerdan algo que de una línea de tiempo pasada? Y si es así hay más de dos o puede ser otra cosa? Y ya por curiosidad Lili también sabe algo?

3mth
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DaoistLLOVLK

Excelente historia y no deja de sorprenderme y no suena forzado y tampoco aburre, muy buena trama y desarrollo de los acontecimientos y personajes también muy buen desarrollo se acercan y interactuan de forma pasiva

3mth
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DaoistLLOVLK

Excelente hermano 👌, este no deja de sorprenderme es fluido y no forzado, muy buena narrativa y desarrollo de personajes, solo quedaría ver las reacciones de los demás personajes principales, pues pienso que si Riveria y Aiz recuerdan algo que paso? Me preguntó los demás miembros de la familia Hestia recuerdan algo?

3mth
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DaoistLLOVLK

Hasta el momento no deja de sorprenderme la historia pero me preguntó cuál será el comportamiento de Freya será una celosa qué hará lo qué quiera o verá a Bell como a un igual al que tendrá respetar? O simplemente no se rendirá para conquistar su corazón?

3mth
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Arturwho

I love it is really nice story I like the system of fate and is a really nice story

3mth
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Voids_TrueOverlord

this book is the best one after many fanfic i read about danmaci that so-so but This one is the best as far i know.....keep up author

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4mth
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InmortalE

The story is good, I will not deny it, however it has two big flaws, one is that the author complicated the story too much and two is that he exaggerated things greatly. Other than that, it's a good read.

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4mth
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seventh_child

Não me lembro do original, mas eu acho que você melhorou muito a história... Embora eu não tenha tanta certeza, já que faz muito tempo que eu li essa história, além de ter sido MTL.

4mth
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Grim_Yukki

Goated story which this could earn another chapter…

4mth
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CielTmpst

.....................................................mmm

Membuka SPOILER
4mth
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Esdeaths_Slave

Very good and well written story. No mtl which is good and little to no grammar mistakes. 5/5

4mth
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Tokinada_dao_hood

Jo Jo Jo Jo jo jo jo. Jo mama

4mth
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Wruthor

This Fqnfic literally met all of my expectations!! So, More Chapters!!! RAAAHHHHH!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Membuka SPOILER
4mth
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Tokinada_dao_hood

Master piece. There is no thing here stop watching.

4mth
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Marcus_Hembree

I am enjoying the work, something's too keep in mind, don't let him be able to summon servants until just shortly before the war against Apollo and after Lili joins the Hestia Familia for good. Make Summon Servant a skill he aquires. The command seals be usage limit be based on his adventure level. Also keep the joke about Bell being being compared to the rabbit monster Almiraj.

4mth
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Molly_DV

little bit of mess and slightly annoying but this fic still 40 chapter so im still curious where's the author take us from here

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4mth
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Tokinada_dao_hood

Master piece its so cool and the fact that it well be a multiverse to is better

4mth
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Psan
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Worth it, but im worried about mc being so overpowered so fast, he will have no chance to meet girls like Tiona and Lily before he is way to powerful.

4mth
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IndecisiveKing

I was promised free cookies that’s why I’m here so you can continue on?………..

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4mth
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Shibou_Kurai

Really interesting story... I like it [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

4mth
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Accott

Ta weno el fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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