Naruto: The Unwoven Threads of Fate

LV 1

Chaddts

It's an A.U fanfic with random changes not caused by the Mc. Furthermore the knowledge he does have, he doesn't use. The story is kinda rushed, particularly the academy portion and almost 0 world building is done. The Mc is also extremely unlikable and lazy, not making use of his unique situation at all, aside from unlocking his own chakra. By the time of his team assignment we have a very limited understanding of his abilities or his chakra amount. All in all, the mc is very annoying, and lazy. He enrolled in the academy just to slack off when he doesn't even want to be a Shinobi aside from the power, to use as protection. Realistically, he could train on his own as a civilian if that's all he wanted. The writing itself is fine, and everything is understandable. Even some good humor mixed in, but the Mc himself is simply such a waste I can't read any further.

LV 2

elpepe

It's not bad, although it bothers me that the MC is a reincarnated but does nothing, it feels like the author wanted to nerf him before he even got any power, he doesn't even use his knowledge, I understand that he might have forgotten some things but that excuse only works if the MC put in effort training in childhood, but although I repeat he does nothing, it would have been better if the MC had not been reincarnated, there I would have believed that he would only train when he was on a team

LV 1

Daoist6PLNq1

Before I started writing reviews, I wanted to read up to the last chapters. But I couldn't hold back. So, let's begin. One of the distinctive features of this fanfic is that not only is there no system, but the protagonist's power is derived specifically from the Naruto world, not from some cosmic source or gifts from gods. It is based on what has been developed within this world, or what the protagonist has elevated to a high level. All actions have a cause-and-effect relationship. The author strives to imbue the events with reasons, whether physical or psychological; everything has an explanation. This is refreshing, especially compared to other fanfics where the protagonist simply has to appear on the horizon, and like in a fairy tale, girls are madly in love with him (without any reason), and enemies fall in heaps. In conclusion, I highly recommend this story to those who are tired of fanfics where the protagonist has a system, and the characters from the Naruto world serve merely as a backdrop without any development. Especially in terms of female characters (there's no silly harem; the protagonist doesn't collect them like Pokémon).

LV 14

abc_logan

its surprisingly very good and nice character development

LV 3

Vasilli_niko

It's good story for me so pls more ch making yeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeye,e,e,e,e,yeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeye,e,e,e,e,yeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeye,e,e,e,e,yeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeye,e,e,e,e,yeyeyeyeyeyeyeye