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An excellent start to what I think is a very promising story and look forward to more updates to come.
I have eas the first 20 chapters all in one day. I absolutely love this book and the slight twist on a classic trope. The MC seems determined but aware of his limitations. There sourounding characters are all fairly unique which will hopefully continue. Overall I enjoy this book and the only flaw I can find I the odd paragraph every now and then that just seems a tiny bit out of place and needs a reread but overall brilliant. Please let this book continue
Kai is a character that is easy to empathize with. The story gives him a solid background of struggle and suffering. It would be interesting to see more details about the antagonist, particularly in relation to their motivations or relationships, which would make them a more complete and believable villain. I see you've been updating daily, that's great! Keep up the pace, you're doing well!
Although, I have seen 100+ webnovels with the same power system, this seems somewhat unique among the other solo leveling copies. Keep it up. “If I was really a god then I would be the most incompetent god in the world. The most helpless god in the world who knew everything but couldn’t explain anything.” - Kim Dokja
Story is very good. If I may make a suggestion, I have noticed that some of your character dialogue could be potentially either shortened or rearranged slightly. This could help your readers better understand who is speaking at the given moment. But overall, still very well written. And there is always room for improvement, in order to make your story just that much more enjoyable.
This is an interesting piece! I love the way the plot is crafted and built. Good work author!
is this about righteous nonsense cause iIdont like that shit tell me quickly so that I know if or not to read.,,.....,..............................
An excellent start to what I think is a very promising story and look forward to more updates to come.
I have eas the first 20 chapters all in one day. I absolutely love this book and the slight twist on a classic trope. The MC seems determined but aware of his limitations. There sourounding characters are all fairly unique which will hopefully continue. Overall I enjoy this book and the only flaw I can find I the odd paragraph every now and then that just seems a tiny bit out of place and needs a reread but overall brilliant. Please let this book continue
Kai is a character that is easy to empathize with. The story gives him a solid background of struggle and suffering. It would be interesting to see more details about the antagonist, particularly in relation to their motivations or relationships, which would make them a more complete and believable villain. I see you've been updating daily, that's great! Keep up the pace, you're doing well!
Although, I have seen 100+ webnovels with the same power system, this seems somewhat unique among the other solo leveling copies. Keep it up. “If I was really a god then I would be the most incompetent god in the world. The most helpless god in the world who knew everything but couldn’t explain anything.” - Kim Dokja
Story is very good. If I may make a suggestion, I have noticed that some of your character dialogue could be potentially either shortened or rearranged slightly. This could help your readers better understand who is speaking at the given moment. But overall, still very well written. And there is always room for improvement, in order to make your story just that much more enjoyable.
This is an interesting piece! I love the way the plot is crafted and built. Good work author!
is this about righteous nonsense cause iIdont like that shit tell me quickly so that I know if or not to read.,,.....,..............................