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A Blue Lock Fanfic
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John Price was a young upcoming football talent. Just as he was beginning to take his dream of becoming a professional player seriously, his life was tragically cut short in a building collapse.
Now he is reincarnated and given a second chance to pursue his dreams.
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Cover Image is AI generated using imagine.art cause I can't draw yet.
Also, this is my first attempt at writing. Constructive criticism are welcome.
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything mentions in this story, expect for my OC and plot.
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So far so good, the only tip for the author is to try to finish the chapters in a more natural way, as there were several released at once it didn't interfere with reading, but when the normal frequency starts it may leave something to be desired. Great work!
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The only thing i don't like bout it is that MC likes? to play more of a midfielder and he doesn't score goals when he clearly could do so, often passing the ball to his teammate but other than that the book has a lot of potential. pls make him score more goals author
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Okay this is an actual review,, Kira/Mc is an knock off isagi with better dribbling and shooting.( Author doesn't describe his moves he'll say. "Kira shot was perfect and went corner" or dribbled smoothly, Theres no telling or unique to him. He helps everyone in blue lock/In His wing like isagi and raichi. Author its blue lock give him his own personality he always trying to improve them. *(And through out the whole story he had not improved or got better Nothing for the whole story*) AND Then on the field he trys writting him all hard and try to make him feel less friendly making orders but then off he always helping and has no backbone to say no... Im done reading this and hope this will tell what you wanted to know about the fic. Story development slow as he build raichi his own background and to make him improve better *His favorite character which is fine but don't be changing the story or fic because of that*. (To learn more on blue lock writting would say read God of Blue lock and other fics just to learn how they write it and take notes as your mc has nothing fancy or cool to even keep him in blue lock.)
Jilid 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Jilid 1
- 1 Chapter 1 – Ryosuke Kira 24 days ago
- 2 Chapter 2 – The Blue Lock Project 24 days ago
- 3 Chapter 3 – Conviction 24 days ago
- 4 Chapter 4 – Team Z 24 days ago
- 5 Chapter 5 – Scrimmage 1 24 days ago
- 6 Chapter 6 – Scrimmage 2 24 days ago
- 7 Chapter 7 - Scrimmage 3 24 days ago
- 8 Chapter 8 – Pecking Order 24 days ago
- 9 Chapter 9 – First Selection 24 days ago
- 10 Chapter 10 – Team X vs Team Z 24 days ago
- 11 Chapter 11 – Control 24 days ago
- 12 Chapter 12 – A Striker 24 days ago
- 13 Chapter 13 – End of Game 1 22 days ago
- 14 Chapter 14 – Weapons 22 days ago
- 15 Chapter 15 – Team Y vs Team Z 21 days ago
- 16 Chapter 16 – Scrambled 21 days ago
- 17 Chapter 17 – Half-time Strategy 19 days ago
- 18 Chapter 18 – Start of the Second Half 19 days ago
- 19 Chapter 19 – Desperation 19 days ago
- 20 Chapter 20 – Isagi’s Reborn 19 days ago
- 21 Chapter 21 – Aftermath 18 days ago
- 22 Chapter 22 – Denial 18 days ago
- 23 Chapter 23 – Preparation 17 days ago
- 24 Chapter 24 – Team W vs Team Z 17 days ago
- 25 Chapter 25 – Grinding Game 16 days ago
- 26 Chapter 26 – Half-time Drama 16 days ago
- 27 Chapter 27 – Burden 15 days ago
- 28 Chapter 28 – Attacking Football 15 days ago
- 29 Chapter 29 – Thunder Strike 14 days ago
- 30 Chapter 30 – Raichi’s Looking Glass 14 days ago
- 31 Chapter 31 – Crunch Time 13 days ago
- 32 Chapter 32 – World-Class Specialist 13 days ago
- 33 Chapter 33 – Slow Day 12 days ago
- 34 Chapter 34 – Trouble In Paradise 12 days ago
- 35 Chapter 35 – Calm before the Storm 11 days ago
- 36 Chapter 36 – Team V vs Team Z 11 days ago
- 37 Chapter 37 – Lockdown 10 days ago
- 38 Chapter 38 – Domination 10 days ago
- 39 Chapter 39 – Futile Effort 9 days ago
- 40 Chapter 40 – End of First Selection 9 days ago
- 41 Chapter 41 – Celebration 8 days ago
- 42 Chapter 42 – Training Montage 8 days ago
- 43 Chapter 43 – Second Selection 7 days ago
- 44 Chapter 44 – Three Man’s team 7 days ago
- 45 Chapter 45 – Explosive Dragon 3 days ago
- 46 Chapter 46 – Meeting of Two Alphas 3 days ago
Same boring plot that happens in every BL fanfic. Oh I’m gonna be in same wing as Isagi and make everyone stronger in the beginning so when the next selection comes everyone is stronger and prove my worth yadayada. Boring and overused. Come up with something original you bum.