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I can tell he took inspiration from SS but it has its own plot and has a unique taste to it it's also pretty well written with only a few grammar mistakes here and there. All in all good story.
I cannot stress on how peak it is. You WILL read it. Maybe not now (Grave mistake btw), but when you see it 2 years later, you'll regret not getting on the bandwagon early (I'm a Mr.Mysteries glazer but it's true)
World building and power system are cool. I don’t really fw the mc much but good read overall.
Why are you here? Start reading it already. It's peak. Why are you even reading this review, just start the novel already, stop wasting time! .
Read it. Right now. I'm threatening you to read it, for your own sake. Just read it.........................................................
Ah, it's so peak my mind can't handle it. But of course, I'm not glazing it's just that amazing.
I saw and watched your video on YouTube (which was released 12 days ago) and it was really helpful and I just had to check your novel , i also watched some your vidoes on your YouTube channel and subscribed and for that i am giving this novel a five stars rating ( even though i havent read a single chapter ) . I'm planning to read if you keep updating in the future thank you for the helpful vid because I really planning to become an author but don't really have the budget and know how to get started. — Unseen_nathan
I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress from here Mr. Mysteries! I Can't wait for Atlas/Edmund to overcome the trial. The Straw man, the eyes, ranks, they're all elements to this story you've got me hooked on. And seeing the Romance tag, I wonder how you'll develop that.
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I really like the story so far. It's very pleasant to read and also very easy to understand. I'm definitely looking forward and hope that this story will go on for a long time...it definitely has a lot of potential 🙏🏻
The story has been nice so far, it’s set up a unique variant of stories with towers but instead it’s doors
Kinda surprised I didn't review yet. Peak. Stand proud Mr. Mysteries, you can cook.
I'm enjoying the story so far. I keep coming back to see if it's been updated, super excited to see how the story develops and progresses (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ
I really like this novel so far. I saw that’s this is inspired by shadow slave because there are some thing that like the same and I really like that. So far, I would rate this a 10/10. It’s really good so far 👍💯🔥 And also I want to know if the MC is going to be in a group, going through trails together or not?
writing quality is amazing. I can tell the author has read much and knows how to write. the updates are amazing, with 2 chapters a day coming out. Story so far has been intriguing and I feel it's just going to get better and better.
i got an idea and i wanted to share It with you, when we get more ahead with the story, by that i mean many hundreds if the story Is short, or thousands if the story Is long, would you add the universe to the story? for example various races (ex. elfs, dragons,ecc.) or even unique races that don't exist already and each has their own Power system, talents, maybe higher and lower races that have vast difference in innate strenght, (like the difference between a dragon and a wyvern for example), maybe even galaxies, gods that reign those galaxies and dimensions ( for example First to 4th dimension), humans reside in the First, second dimension other races live, and the same with the 3rd and 4th, in each dimension time flows differently, and the Door trails are bringing people in those other dimensions, i know It sounds like a Grand but stupid idea, but i believe if you Plan everything carefully, the story would become many times Better than It already Is. Hope this idea of mine can help you.😉 ps. i Just realised i wrote 1k words, Sorry about that lol
This novel is easy to read and nit difficult to get into. Definitely good for people who like to take things slow and understand things better
I'm leaving a five star review to Mr.Mysteries as I wish him luck on this new venture as a fellow writer. Read all chapters out love the concept and hope it does well in the long run!
I just saw the name and i knew it is peak, didn't even need to read it, i can smell the peak
This is my first time seriously reading a webnovel and trying to give critique about it. So far I would say the story is decent, it isn't the greatest ever but it is definitely enjoyable and keeps you wanting to read. There aren't to many chapters yet to give a detailed review but as of now, it definitely has potential to become good if everything gets fleshed out enough. This Webnovel also reminds me a lot of "Savior of Divine Blood" where in that world, people randomly get doors assigned to them in 3 different ranks, bronze, silver and gold. I just thought it's kinda similar with the concept of these doors appearing for people randomly and having a trial for them to complete. Keep up the good work!
I came after watching the tik tok Tbh I wasn t expecting much but hell yeah the story is so good that it reminds me of The days I started reading Sl and Lotm which are my fav novels I feel like another masterpiece is born Keep going with your hardworking
I really enjoyed the story, but I doubt this is the author’s fault, at times in the story I just found myself getting lost pretty frequently. Overall the story and plot was really good, enjoyed the characters a lot.
I can tell he took inspiration from SS but it has its own plot and has a unique taste to it it's also pretty well written with only a few grammar mistakes here and there. All in all good story.
I cannot stress on how peak it is. You WILL read it. Maybe not now (Grave mistake btw), but when you see it 2 years later, you'll regret not getting on the bandwagon early (I'm a Mr.Mysteries glazer but it's true)
World building and power system are cool. I don’t really fw the mc much but good read overall.
Why are you here? Start reading it already. It's peak. Why are you even reading this review, just start the novel already, stop wasting time! .
Read it. Right now. I'm threatening you to read it, for your own sake. Just read it.........................................................
Ah, it's so peak my mind can't handle it. But of course, I'm not glazing it's just that amazing.
I saw and watched your video on YouTube (which was released 12 days ago) and it was really helpful and I just had to check your novel , i also watched some your vidoes on your YouTube channel and subscribed and for that i am giving this novel a five stars rating ( even though i havent read a single chapter ) . I'm planning to read if you keep updating in the future thank you for the helpful vid because I really planning to become an author but don't really have the budget and know how to get started. — Unseen_nathan
I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress from here Mr. Mysteries! I Can't wait for Atlas/Edmund to overcome the trial. The Straw man, the eyes, ranks, they're all elements to this story you've got me hooked on. And seeing the Romance tag, I wonder how you'll develop that.
Membuka SPOILER I really like the story so far. It's very pleasant to read and also very easy to understand. I'm definitely looking forward and hope that this story will go on for a long time...it definitely has a lot of potential 🙏🏻
The story has been nice so far, it’s set up a unique variant of stories with towers but instead it’s doors
Kinda surprised I didn't review yet. Peak. Stand proud Mr. Mysteries, you can cook.
I'm enjoying the story so far. I keep coming back to see if it's been updated, super excited to see how the story develops and progresses (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ
I really like this novel so far. I saw that’s this is inspired by shadow slave because there are some thing that like the same and I really like that. So far, I would rate this a 10/10. It’s really good so far 👍💯🔥 And also I want to know if the MC is going to be in a group, going through trails together or not?
writing quality is amazing. I can tell the author has read much and knows how to write. the updates are amazing, with 2 chapters a day coming out. Story so far has been intriguing and I feel it's just going to get better and better.
i got an idea and i wanted to share It with you, when we get more ahead with the story, by that i mean many hundreds if the story Is short, or thousands if the story Is long, would you add the universe to the story? for example various races (ex. elfs, dragons,ecc.) or even unique races that don't exist already and each has their own Power system, talents, maybe higher and lower races that have vast difference in innate strenght, (like the difference between a dragon and a wyvern for example), maybe even galaxies, gods that reign those galaxies and dimensions ( for example First to 4th dimension), humans reside in the First, second dimension other races live, and the same with the 3rd and 4th, in each dimension time flows differently, and the Door trails are bringing people in those other dimensions, i know It sounds like a Grand but stupid idea, but i believe if you Plan everything carefully, the story would become many times Better than It already Is. Hope this idea of mine can help you.😉 ps. i Just realised i wrote 1k words, Sorry about that lol
This novel is easy to read and nit difficult to get into. Definitely good for people who like to take things slow and understand things better
I'm leaving a five star review to Mr.Mysteries as I wish him luck on this new venture as a fellow writer. Read all chapters out love the concept and hope it does well in the long run!
I just saw the name and i knew it is peak, didn't even need to read it, i can smell the peak
This is my first time seriously reading a webnovel and trying to give critique about it. So far I would say the story is decent, it isn't the greatest ever but it is definitely enjoyable and keeps you wanting to read. There aren't to many chapters yet to give a detailed review but as of now, it definitely has potential to become good if everything gets fleshed out enough. This Webnovel also reminds me a lot of "Savior of Divine Blood" where in that world, people randomly get doors assigned to them in 3 different ranks, bronze, silver and gold. I just thought it's kinda similar with the concept of these doors appearing for people randomly and having a trial for them to complete. Keep up the good work!
I came after watching the tik tok Tbh I wasn t expecting much but hell yeah the story is so good that it reminds me of The days I started reading Sl and Lotm which are my fav novels I feel like another masterpiece is born Keep going with your hardworking
I really enjoyed the story, but I doubt this is the author’s fault, at times in the story I just found myself getting lost pretty frequently. Overall the story and plot was really good, enjoyed the characters a lot.