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mc gave away items from system aint no way they gonna think it just popped out of nowhere few decades those skills from system that he told to others will become common
Love the this fanfic keep up the good work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
hey bro please next sign in lengendary super Saiyan bloodline and shadow monarch
overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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It's a great, mid burning story, something to get easily lost in ୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨... I also like the romance in it, it all seems natural, not forced and i can't wait to see where it goes...
Una genial lectura muy entretenida y fluida el autor hizo un buen trabajo ya que tiene una buena traducción y gramática, me pareció bastante interesante por su comienzo sólido y lógico junto con la implementación de técnicas de entrenamiento (Respiración del Sol y derivados, los 3 tipos de Haki y el Rokushiki) para el MC y su familia obteniendo una base corporal y técnica MUY sólida para futuras mejoras genéticas y mágicas quizás para combatir contra oponentes que varíen en la escala de poder en Marvel 😏💪🏻🤙🏻 espero que siga así de buena la historia
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you know i like your novel love it infact but why are u so 😭 slowwww!!!!!!. be fast or ama be forced to threaten you
honestly , I decided to ignore the bad reviews and give this story a try and it's not bad but it also isn't really good , like man how tf is he teaching these civilians haki ? the breathing techniques was already pushing it for me since it was a gift from the system but apparently all these kids got the physique of captain America ? Man the unrealistic scenarios in this story is killing me but it's good as a story to read if you're just bored
A great story for me. till now its pacing and storyline is good. will look forward for more
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🧐🤔😁
The author is too lazy to make titles for the chapters and I'm too lazy to make a meaningful review.
Didn't thought it would be good but it's great 😸👍🏿 Great fanfiction love it May recommed you just give it a chance Just read 10 chapters you will love it
Overall it’s a very interesting book that I’m excited to see how the story will unfold. I recommend you give it a try and if you do you might be pleasantly surprised.
Good story, I'm liking it very much. Keep the updates rolling, and Praise the Author 🙌😆
this story is currently my number one marvel story due to how frequent the updates are and the fact that I forgot this is a translation speaks volumes how good it is
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍The best marvel fanfic for me👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 .,.................... ......................................................
So far, I think it's relatively good. The translation is also good, the only thing missing is the real action (MCU plot, iron man 1...) and romance. The romantic relationship is slowly building up and so far I only see 2-3 love interests, so I hope it will be a little harem. I recommend it.
for the people looking for the raws name, it's "American comics sign up sparkling fruit at the start"
great translation, but having a freaking Logia, and Pika Pika no mi at that is too broken. What's up with CN ffs and their obsession on Pika Pika no mi?
i am loving this author i have to say Chinese stories are good but their fetish with adding patriotism in it overshadows everything
everything is good. logic story, good introduction and so on the only thing missing is romance. Personally: a harem of 2-3 people would suffice with some nice smut and all Generally: some romance with at least Wanda (no smut chapters necessary) to provide substance to their daily life These are just my thoughts thou so no real pressure I just think it would give Leon a realistic character trait I mean you don´t need to be a genius to know what every normal human would want in the MCU, literally FANTASY chicks
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[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] i hope this harem don't drop it
i hope you don't drop this cause i was looking forward to the translation of this story
A great story in my opinion. I've worked hard to present this to you guys and made it readable as much as I can. Also, don't forget to praise the author 'Ear Pick' for creating such a fun read.
mc gave away items from system aint no way they gonna think it just popped out of nowhere few decades those skills from system that he told to others will become common
Love the this fanfic keep up the good work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
hey bro please next sign in lengendary super Saiyan bloodline and shadow monarch
overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It's a great, mid burning story, something to get easily lost in ୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨... I also like the romance in it, it all seems natural, not forced and i can't wait to see where it goes...
Una genial lectura muy entretenida y fluida el autor hizo un buen trabajo ya que tiene una buena traducción y gramática, me pareció bastante interesante por su comienzo sólido y lógico junto con la implementación de técnicas de entrenamiento (Respiración del Sol y derivados, los 3 tipos de Haki y el Rokushiki) para el MC y su familia obteniendo una base corporal y técnica MUY sólida para futuras mejoras genéticas y mágicas quizás para combatir contra oponentes que varíen en la escala de poder en Marvel 😏💪🏻🤙🏻 espero que siga así de buena la historia
Membuka SPOILER you know i like your novel love it infact but why are u so 😭 slowwww!!!!!!. be fast or ama be forced to threaten you
honestly , I decided to ignore the bad reviews and give this story a try and it's not bad but it also isn't really good , like man how tf is he teaching these civilians haki ? the breathing techniques was already pushing it for me since it was a gift from the system but apparently all these kids got the physique of captain America ? Man the unrealistic scenarios in this story is killing me but it's good as a story to read if you're just bored
A great story for me. till now its pacing and storyline is good. will look forward for more
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🧐🤔😁
The author is too lazy to make titles for the chapters and I'm too lazy to make a meaningful review.
Didn't thought it would be good but it's great 😸👍🏿 Great fanfiction love it May recommed you just give it a chance Just read 10 chapters you will love it
Overall it’s a very interesting book that I’m excited to see how the story will unfold. I recommend you give it a try and if you do you might be pleasantly surprised.
Good story, I'm liking it very much. Keep the updates rolling, and Praise the Author 🙌😆
this story is currently my number one marvel story due to how frequent the updates are and the fact that I forgot this is a translation speaks volumes how good it is
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍The best marvel fanfic for me👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 .,.................... ......................................................
So far, I think it's relatively good. The translation is also good, the only thing missing is the real action (MCU plot, iron man 1...) and romance. The romantic relationship is slowly building up and so far I only see 2-3 love interests, so I hope it will be a little harem. I recommend it.
for the people looking for the raws name, it's "American comics sign up sparkling fruit at the start"
great translation, but having a freaking Logia, and Pika Pika no mi at that is too broken. What's up with CN ffs and their obsession on Pika Pika no mi?
i am loving this author i have to say Chinese stories are good but their fetish with adding patriotism in it overshadows everything
everything is good. logic story, good introduction and so on the only thing missing is romance. Personally: a harem of 2-3 people would suffice with some nice smut and all Generally: some romance with at least Wanda (no smut chapters necessary) to provide substance to their daily life These are just my thoughts thou so no real pressure I just think it would give Leon a realistic character trait I mean you don´t need to be a genius to know what every normal human would want in the MCU, literally FANTASY chicks
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[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] i hope this harem don't drop it
i hope you don't drop this cause i was looking forward to the translation of this story
A great story in my opinion. I've worked hard to present this to you guys and made it readable as much as I can. Also, don't forget to praise the author 'Ear Pick' for creating such a fun read.